Akkiixiao's manga / #Historical(5)

Who could resist being smitten by Kaelus? Saint is a true bitch, but not in a villain way; she's naive as a fuck, and she's really getting on my nerves. I can't say that I feel sorry for her. She was a commoner until Helios married her, and Kaelus played a key role in her becoming the crown princess. And that damn "Saint" bitch was crying and refusing to apologize because she was a saint and did not want to be in the wrong. This prevented the Crown Prince Helios, who was now guilty and wanted to apologize to his "best friend," from doing so. (She be calling herself a fucking "SAINT"? Hah! With that brain of hers? HAHAHA) Publicly criticizing Caelus for his cruelty, even though she knows he loves her so dearly that he will do anything for her. He gave the land, helped at the flood, and did all the paperwork just so she and Helios could be busy being happy lovey-dovey with each other and killing the Orcus Family, who are enslaving, kidnapping, killing, and raising illegal soldiers to shake the monarchy. It is said that even the Emperor is afraid of the Orcus family. And that's why Kaelus took matters into his own hands, for the sake of his friend and the woman he loved. And then she told him to never see his face again, and she ran out without hearing Kaelus? Bitch thinks the world is all sunshine and butterflies; she didn't even experience a single hardship. Her path until now has been all flowery, without even a single thorn. She didn't even trust Kaelus; he didn't even think of all he did for her, like it was worth nothing. Bitch didn't even think that without Kaelus killing the Orcus family, she wouldn't be standing by his highness, the crown prince Helios. Bitch thinks she will still be alive just because she has the backing of the crown prince and the marquis; the Orcus family can kidnap and kill her anytime.   Okay, calm down self... I think that the pink-haired saint picked Helios because he's the crown prince, to become the crown princess with more power and royalty than being a marquise. Or she's scared of rejecting the crown prince, which I don't consider to be her choice because I hate her and I don't want to sympathize with her. They even separated after one year of marriage.

Ch. 91 – Did Leticia really just seduce her husband while chaos is literally unfolding across the continent because of her rampaging wings? Like… seriously? That’s some horrible timing. After everything that happened in the holy palace, you just go home and forget—or worse, don’t care—about the innocent people getting hurt because of you? Josephina’s obviously furious, Calisto is still chasing her, and somehow your priority is sex to ‘feel alive’? I get the emotional weight of the conversation, but… maybe save it for when you've actually dealt with the disasters you caused? It’s honestly giving me whiplash. The pacing is so inconsistent—one minute she’s publicly declaring herself as the real saintess, and the next, it’s like… all of that just vanished and she’s back home having a honeymoon? What even happened in between? Why does it feel like the story’s patching up holes with random scenes that don’t match the urgency? It’s messy. And this moment just feels icky and tone-deaf to the overall situation. That said, I do like the theme of the story. The ML might look basic, but he’s the greenest flag I’ve seen—he’s a whole forest. And the FL is kind, your typical MC, but their love is sweet. I won’t deny that, even though I can’t help but picture them like they’re 15-year-olds in a high school romance. The whole thing feels like a story I would've written in high school—strong FL, lovable green-flag husband, villains who are defeated with the power of friendship or wings or whatever. But hey, I’m not trying to be too harsh—it is cute. It’s just… the first few chapters were really confusing. At first, it shows Leticia seemingly killing her husband in his sleep. Then 2–3 chapters later, nope—that didn’t happen. Instead, Leticia’s on her deathbed while a war’s raging outside, making it seem like she’s dying now. Then more chapters later, that’s not what happened either—it turns out Ditrain faced Josephina and killed himself, while Leticia lived but was captured and brought back to the holy palace… and then died later. The storyline just feels so inconsistent. Like, you think a plotline is wrapped up, and then suddenly many chapters later they “continue” that same scene and say it didn’t end there—only to add another continuation, and another version of what really happened. It’s like the story is being stretched out to look like it has more lore than it actually does. You get what I mean?