Fine Play
Chapter 1 (21 May 2012) Summary: Nanafuji is a regular customer at the cafe where Kaji works at as a waiter. The two became quite friendly when Kaji returned Nanafuji's lost cellphone to him. Kaji told Nanafuji that he had a problem with a stalker and the latter suggested that he should pretend to be Kaji's lover to make the stalker will give up on Kaji... I liked this one shot. Even though it only has thirty-five pages, all the conflict was perfectly drawn and told here. The uke was so clever for using his sister as a fake stalker so that he could get together with the seme. The seme too, he was so dense, yet understandable at the same time. I like the sex scene even though it was brief. Yet the kiss scene and fellatio were hot and satisfying. I liked it, even though the ending was a bit cliche. Still. This is a nice story. 3.5 3.5 3.5 4
Hatsukoi No Atosaki