this moment....wow, this is an actual great use of buildup and then an absolutely perfect romantic punchline to end on. Im sorta suprised how good the third chapter was at explaining the frustration the character was feeling, how it all ended up messing his relationship with the best friend.....but then it goes all out with the ending of the chapter where all that buildup you've been reading essentially explodes when.....they finally meet again. It kinda feels like destiny, that this was always meant to happen,there's no way you can forget him.....and that the punchline, "they say even tattoos embedded deep within one's flesh fades with time. Where are you embedded, that you remain so deep within me?" even the panelling of the text/words helps with the punchline hitting hard, as you read, each panels of words runs deep into you before u read the next panels of words, ur brain is anticipating the next text, separated by panels, YOU NEED TO KNOW but these panels keeps stopping you, man..... And then, the punchline hits you, and it hits....good. Definitely not something i was expecting from this yaoi.(edited) I mean, i doubt im actually gonna read anymore of this yaoi but i just wanted to tell someone about how i felt during the third chapter. TL;DR it was a good chapter overall, perfect culmination of the past 2 chapters.
this moment....wow, this is an actual great use of buildup and then an absolutely perfect romantic punchline to end on. Im sorta suprised how good the third chapter was at explaining the frustration the character was feeling, how it all ended up messing his relationship with the best friend.....but then it goes all out with the ending of the chapter where all that buildup you've been reading essentially explodes when.....they finally meet again. It kinda feels like destiny, that this was always meant to happen,there's no way you can forget him.....and that the punchline, "they say even tattoos embedded deep within one's flesh fades with time. Where are you embedded, that you remain so deep within me?" even the panelling of the text/words helps with the punchline hitting hard, as you read, each panels of words runs deep into you before u read the next panels of words, ur brain is anticipating the next text, separated by panels, YOU NEED TO KNOW but these panels keeps stopping you, man..... And then, the punchline hits you, and it hits....good. Definitely not something i was expecting from this yaoi.(edited)
I mean, i doubt im actually gonna read anymore of this yaoi but i just wanted to tell someone about how i felt during the third chapter. TL;DR it was a good chapter overall, perfect culmination of the past 2 chapters.