Lemme honest...Not really my cup of tea . But it's interesting to read, and i read till the end before i realise it.. LoL, it's rare plot for yaoi...so it might click. I am sorry i can't give you a detail feedback cuz i don't really know anything about (horror/crime) genre... But it was good reading ,and got me really curious about what next...good luck with your journey... And i checked for character design in your bio but i didn't find anything... maybe it's private?
Lemme honest...Not really my cup of tea . But it's interesting to read, and i read till the end before i realise it.. LoL, it's rare plot for yaoi...so it might click. I am sorry i can't give you a detail feedback cuz i don't really know anything about (horror/crime) genre...
But it was good reading ,and got me really curious about what next...good luck with your journey...
And i checked for character design in your bio but i didn't find anything... maybe it's private?