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ShaYii June 18, 2021 6:04 pm

A guy like you is a very... it has a good plot of course with the stones etc. But there's a couple of... things that don't really make sense.

Art style
The art style changed drastically from the start to the finish, in the shading, face structure, art style etc. It's not something bad, it's something to point out

The reality of it all
1st. After everything that Go Siwons been through, I'm surprised that he doesn't have any signs of ptsd, trust issues or whatnot. The emotional abuse that he went through, the emotions that he must have felt when he was being sexually harassed by Lu Xuan Run, getting his relationships torn apart, when his friend got kidnapped and started acting weird, getting bullied at school, almost getting killed, getting rumors spread etc. The reality of it all is a bit.... unrealistic that he could suddenly go back to being happy without any side affects

2nd. Lu Xuan Run. He has mentally abused, sexually assulted and harmed Go Siwon. He kidnapped Siwon and put him on a private island, and Siwon... he didn't really seem to mind it? He knew somewhat about what Xuan did to Kang but he still... it's odd that he'd just lay back and relax so easily.

3rd. A bit... too accepting. Chapter 82. It's the wrap up. Xuan gets proved wrong etc. The thing that makes no sense is that after all the trauma that Xuan put Siwon through, he just smiles and pats Xuans head and says "oh you just wanted to be loved." Normally, people wouldn't forgive that easily, no one would. Sexually assult, mental trauma, it doesn't make sense. It's just... too unrealistic, too cliche. "hows that for affection." They summed it up too quick. And then they say "Ill see you at school." That's borderline cliche and then Siwon says "Yeah you owe us an apology, you better buy us lunch or something!" That is very cliche and somewhat... cringy? And then Xuan calls Siwon and Kang his friends. Ah yes, Siwon if you want Xuan to give you an apology, he can give you it behind a cell and a hell ton of bars. But I get it, you couldn't put someone behind bars for something that happens in your dreams, it wouldn't make sense and they'd think you're crazy. Then again, Siwon is just a bit too accepting.

4th. Chapter 83 *looks at a bed* "I-I think its a bed-" Yeah no shi-
Alright, this chapter. Bit cringy how they just *randomly transforms and changes outfits* but thats... eh its minor. They talk about how Xuan must have felt a lot of pain, then again, everyone feels pain, but they don't go around doing unforgiveable things like indirectly sexually assulting people and posting pictures of them and putting them on the school walls. And then at the end of the chapter "A-ah wait!" [insert dramatic snapping sound here] "you look better with your hair down." what a cliche, continuing, "Im not stopping today" you kinda can't stop cause you're there for eloping but whatever- moving on, chapter 84. [elope scene] and then they get magically teleported back to China, wow. and then the guy that knew all about the stones just sees them and starts clapping cause they eloped, cringy, not even cliche, just cringy. The peace sign "I wish you all the happiness in the world." More cringe.

That's about it. From chapter 85 and on it's decent, they just rushed the ending a bit.

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