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Actually one of the worst stories I’ve read since kiss me liar. The bottom was such a doormat, exactly as he said himself, but he was shown/supposed to be someone with strong opinions and a backbone? Why was he crying all the time. And the top was soo dramatic for no reason, and also written awfully. Half the reasoning behind his actions didn’t make sense. Can’t believe I wasted my time reading this.
There were so many strings left in this story :( I don’t think the ending did a good job of truly wrapping up the story, which is disappointing bc the story was so good for a while.
Yeah for real. Like what even happened with the whole assassination thing. Such a masiv anticlimactic ending. Nothing really happened in the story and it truly had such big potential. I'm disappointed and sad :/