First of all, I hate the whole snake tribe
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Burn in hell slithering bitches
(except our favorires)
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But that ivan confession felt so genuine. I’ll be honest, it took me up until now to renounce him of his first impression and out of pocket behavior, but I was UWU as fuck when he said “You can be weird with me eat whatever fat belly crust in your eyes gap tooth hip dips” (okay i added on some shit)
but I’m rlly cryin bc that is all I want tf
I loved this but found it hard to read at times, there are issues with the pacing, and not a lot of background explanations.
For ex, I’m still confused on who the cousin with the scar on his neck is compared to the past, and whether he really remembered it or was just foreshadowing. He was an ass at first, so I feel like he should have had some sort of real redemption or not been brought up again. The guy from America seemed like more of a costume villain the way he was handled. Also, I get that Moon babe is rich, but the rescue was brushed over quite fast for how dire the situation was. I think that could have used a little suspense.
Meanwhile, *actual* evil old guy, I understood him, but the past buildup was... underwhelming. The past twist was actually really good, I didn’t see that coming (I really didn’t), but the evil old guy didn’t make sense to me as a villain bc he had no background. If anyone should have motive, it should have been him bc of the way he is shown as the literal villain who made this story start in the first place.
The kids are cute, okay. I saw the pregnancy coming and actually enjoyed that, but I still don’t know how old they are. Why wasn’t that mentioned? And for a guy in a coma with atrophy, Moon sure got walking around quick. It would’ve been nice to see some of the kid’s personality, even 1 or 2 spreads. I think that could have been in a chapter to show him in his recovery and actually meeting them considering how important his waking up was rather than be props. Kids are flexible, but still he was a stranger..
Overall, this was cute, but I think a lot was left out in what seemed to be a rush. I would have liked even for the main relationship to develop rather than seem like “Oh you like me? Kya, let’s date~”. I didn’t see a real build for that even though its important to the actual universe (dragon pearl).
Also, I’m only up to 39.5, maybe there will be more that is better, but this would be a lot of chapters in to start writing better. Still, I would gladly continue because this is interesting (or, it could be).
Just wanted to share my feelings.
Like omg
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My emotions really couldnt
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When hyun said he realized that loneliness was the world alek always lived in
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That shit broke my heart
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And then alek realized how he couldn’t have hun bc he was hurting the whole time himself
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Yo like I can’t. I’m glad I continued this manhwa and didn’t give up like ch 50. It aint over obviously. And this wasn’t so much a redemption as it was making things be actually addressed
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Just needed to share that.