Okay Lancelot, I see you. Looking all fresh faced and adorable, you go sir.
Lmaooo she's so relatable. I would hightailed it out of there soon. Looks like we might see some badassery in the upcoming chapters, yaas get your money girl
Haha Aseph's kinda crazy huh haha ha...
Poor horse.
Also yeah right "just like she did for you", we believe ya
Kinda crazy he is a full on loony bin
No, I'm not a fan of how naive Ran is and how overbearing the guy is being.
Even if they're close in age or she's above the legal age of consent or whatever, there's a huge mental gap. He's pretty much grooming her at this point and in the worst of ways. She's going to think this kind of abusive, domineering behaviour is okay.
I like that she's a strong female character and I like the supporting characters but I don't like the ML or their relationship.
Ooh also I want to see more of the other girl and her life as the gang leader's wife. That's kinda cute even though it's a bit Stockholm syndrome-y.
Yaas Ivona, cut that b of a cousin off.
I'm so tired of villain sob stories. Oh poor you, you were compared to some other child growing up or your father didn't inherit whatever so you grew up poor, boo fricking hoo. Lemme play you the world's saddest song on the world's smallest violin while you get your act together and stop blaming your choices on the past.
Also I don't know what that caped person is about but I'm already not having it.
Well said ..
The author is soooooo funny, I look forward to reading their notes at the end!
Also, really liking the plot.
I think I like how the guy doesn't hesitate to kill people. There's no "Oh they're poor and suffering, let me pity them". Nope it's "You hurt my mate now die. Slash slash kill kill." It's kinda refreshing
This story is hilarious!!! The banter between siblings is so accurate. And her reactions, lmaaaoo.
But how was her brother supposed to be the original male lead when he's so young? Like if Ares is the new male lead, isn't the age gap a bit much? Or did they just make the brother younger so he can play the brat?
Loool the guy in chapter 4 with the top hat and mustache that completely ignored her comatose body on the floor to post the letter she was carrying.
When she changed the ml, heroine also changed. Because Kai was supposed to marry a Princess from another kingdom and became an emperor of another country, but when Ares became the ml, heroine became the other princess so Ares could be the emperor, since he's a duke and not a prince or something.
What a beautiful ending (to this chapter) !!! Can I just get more chapters of this two lovely souls falling in love with each other and Baron Gaspal just falls down a well or something.
Ah probably not since there's the whole war thing and the cousin will probably scheme something or the other. At least we'll get to see her show off her awesome powers with her beau by her side.
Seriously though can somebody just punch her father already. Like the cousin and the fiance are terrible but her dad is actual trash dafuq
Oh but what if it turns out that Elzay shares the soul mark with the Emperor dude that Elissa ends up with in the original story. So her purpose of entering the story would be to keep the dude away so Elissa and Aseph can end up together.
Ah probably not. In all likeliness, she's going to end up sharing the soul mark with Aseph but it hasn't shown up yet cause he doesn't have "true feelings" or he's still incapable of love of something and then it'll show up at some very tense moment in the future because ~drama~
Also, I love her maid! Talk about a strong female character, lemme see more of her.
Isn't Arwin just the most! I love it!
Showing off like that, okay we see you.
Also baby girl's got lines, where did that come from.
It's been almost a 100 chapters and she's still slightly scared of him. Come on girl, he's clearly not going to hurt you, get it on!
But I think it's the fear that Arwin finds so interesting so maybe not quite yet.
Oh they're so adorable together!