what exactly was the point of the story?
guy needs money bc he is broke (why? what will he use the money for? how does the job affect his daily life now? what changed with the new money and experience in?) and has a bff who has unrequited feelings for guy who needs money (when did it start? how is he dealing with it? what is gonna happen now that broke guy found himself a lover again? how is his daily life affected by this relationship with his bff?). guy who needs money for some reason thinks he owes a random stranger favors, so random stranger exploits him sexually at his workplace (and everyone acts like that is perfectly normal and makes a lot of sense). turns out random stranger is his boss (why did he hide that fact? why did he want the sexual favors? why did he want broke guy specifically out of all employees? what made him fall in love so quickly? how did he come to be the ceo of a sex shop and anonymous reviewer of the prpducts? what's his relationship with the manager for her to cover for him?) and as they become a couple (very quickly), broke guy thinks his lover is cheating on him, but surprise! it's his lover's twin (why did he hide the fact that he has a twin brother? when his brother is obviously also gay and fooling around with men? in public? close to his twin brother's establishment? where his lover could see? and how come they have the same name? who is this brother and where did he go? he exited as suddenly as he entered the story), so now everything is fine again. the end.
like wtf i am glad i didn't waste money on this one lmao felt like i read a bunch of set-ups or scenarios that lead to nowhere and have no red string connecting them to an overarching plot. we still don't know anything about the characters and saw no development.
yo, shakespeare, this is BL. you cant expect every story to actually have substance because of the nature of the genre. yeah sure there are good bl that make it worth buying but there are plenty of stories out there with the same lacking plot and ppl read that stuff. there's really no point in over analyising this story if you think it's bland, move on. plot holes exist all over this genre we should be grateful for the consistent art quality atleast.
i am allowed to share my opinion lmao i didn't like this comic and gave my reason why. if you don't like it, move on ~
the pacing is weird, the characters' reactions are super unrealistic, and the way bullying, violence and rape are handled are not very cash money naisu, if you ask me.
yeah but i don't think it really intended to be. the characters here look pretty stupid and behave pretty comically.
he trespassed and then raped his neighbor, with no lube and condom. that's not just criminal behavior but also disgusting. his dick could have been who knows where and spreading diseases, and if this happened irl, the victim's anus would be torn or otherwise injured.
Thats the point, its not real life, its fiction ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Lmao I was going to say the same
you can complain like that in all action movie where people kill each others and gore stuff.
but it's supposed to represent reality and real people lmao we are supposed to relate to the characters bc they are human and we are human and they are situated in our world
nah that's not the same lmfao
we know those bad things happen and we recognize them as bad things that happen regretfully. we are not supposed to find them normal or lovely, we are supposed to perceive them as danger, hence why those elements add suspense to a story.
Lmao its not? Just because a story is based in reality doesn't mean all of it is? There's a LOT of romance books, movies etc. That are based in our world but have the most unrealistic things happen. (￣∇￣")
Its fiction. Fiction being based in a realistic world still means its fiction, and won't 100% realistic most of the time ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Also that argument doesn't even make sense because that could be used to discredit a LOT of horror, thriller and psychological books and movies that are based in our reality and are relatable and supposed to be realistic but in a lot of aspects are still very unrealistic, but people still love it. Theres a reason for the word fiction (￣∇￣")
Bro it's fiction because things that don't usually happen in real life happen in fiction. Everything can happen in fiction. What's the fun if you read a fiction ONLY with realistic stuff. It needs weird ass stuff too to keep audience entertained bruh
You have to be able to difference fiction with reality. Don't confuse fiction with reality. Unless you're a young kid that still can't see the difference with reality and fiction (I don't mean to offend you, I genuinely meant that. I'm a teacher you see ╮(￣▽￣)╭)
Also this story has started in a wrong way so it probably will keep going like that. Don't expect any make-sense plot lol. Unless the story is deeply slice of life or really realistic from the start then yes you can complain.
I mean seriously though, this ain't new anymore ╮(￣▽￣)╭ it's just another one of weird ass yaoi. Been reading shits like that for more than 8 years so I'm not even surprised anymore. Welp unless you're new to this weird-and-doesn't-make-sense yaoi?
I think you replied to the wrong person cause I agree with everything you said lmao ╮(￣▽￣)╭ seriously though, fiction is fiction for a reason, if I read a 100% realistic story with nothing weird to spice it up it could get boring real fast, which is why tv shows do the same (￣∇￣")
Oh shit- sorry about that XD and yesss agree
Haha no worries here (⌒▽⌒)
am i the only one who saw benedict cumberbatch in that last page of that last chapter? everyone is fawning over how hot taehee looks with his new haircut and i am here laughing at how he reminds me of that weird englishman
lmaoooo
i absolutely love the uploader notes at the end of each chapter. you can see how invested they are in the education of readers, even when they are just mere fujoshi who wanna see men fuck or smth. truly admirable and we should be grateful. wonderful job.
the style reminds me a little of suzuri ryo. the setting and way of storytelling, juust a little bit, of sakura sawa
the humor in this one is excellent. one of the funniest yaoi i have ever read.