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Reading this through the second time I see so many more plot holes than I remember. Or just lazy writing, really noticeable when Vivian was stabbed. She's laying on the ground dead or alive wasn't very clear at the time. But nobody was rushing to call a doctor or to call a priest to try and heal her. And then when the high priest showed up he could have apparently saved her as they said later in a chapter but that didn't happen. I feel bad for Vivian since she was there literally just to move the plot along so the author didn't put much thought into her actions and the actions around her. Wow. Lol
Either way it was a good read.