The story was so rushed I could barely understand shit + the bottom has LITERALLY 0 chemistry with the top, 90% of their so-called "chemistry" was just them saying "I'll die in your stead" to each other like what the fuck does that even contribute to the story, you mean to tell me they just fell in love overtime because they were willing to sacrifice their lives for each other? That's not how it works, m8—that shit only has an effect when the couple has actual fucking chemistry, NOT THE PART WHERE THAT'S THEIR ENTIRE CHEMISTRY
Also, how the fuck did the blonde ML have more chemistry with the guy by simply just fucking him and wanting to own him? It honestly baffles me that this dude started out by straight up just having sex with him on the God damn spot and for fuck's sake he somehow managed to pull off being a better pair with the top lol.
At this rate, with both bottoms straight up falling out of favor, just write a better bottom... ffs.
“Oh you need money? Sorry but I like you, so lemme forcibly shove my dick up your ass first by drugging you INSTEAD OF JUST USING THAT OPPORTUNITY TO PURSUE YOU” ahh mf
NOT ALMOST EVERYONE WHO READ THIS HAVING NO IDEA WHO EDMOND IS
(For context: He is currently a male servant from the game Fate: Grand order.) ANYWAYS I LOVE THE ARTSTYLE THO MWAH
The fact that they’re uncle and nephew does not sit very well with me now that I’ve read this
A dick of quality remains a dick of quality no matter the beholder
DAMN IT WHICH PART OF ME WANTED TO DROP THIS BACK THEN HELLO?? OR WAS IT JUST A LACK OF CHAPTERS
IS THIS A SIGN