First things first, the perspectives were so confusing, I didn't know if they were in the present or a flashback. For example, when they were talking about the profile pics etc. So messy.
Then, the storyline. Honestly, I thought it had a good start but then the pacing sentoff and there were a lot of??? stuff that made me question their relevance to the story like???
PLUS, So many unresolved stufd like what happened to the rumora, to his rep? What was the point of mentioning them being authors like that if it wasn't heavily relevant to the story? How the hell did his sister know what would happen to their feelinvs? How the hell did they even meet? I HAVE SO MUCH MORE BUT I CAN'T EVEN BOTHER TO MENTION THWM.
LASTLY, THE ENDING MAN. It felt so rushed like how a man would cum just by putting it in kind of rushed. It felt too open-ended and unresolved, like the author just didn't like the story anymore and just gave it a vague ending.
Honestly, this had a lot of potential if only it had proper pacing, consistent perspectives, resolved questions yada yada yada
SEUNGHO BETTER HAVE HEARD THAT OR ELSE IMMA HEAD THERE AND SLICE THAT BITCH FOR CALLING OUR BABY A WHORE