the incest bugs me but the plot so far is interesting and shes actively trying to avoid her crazy love filled brother, ill read for now...shes acting like a counselor for him instead and trying to make him be good
One of them might be adopted. I think that the brother created his sister with his magic thats why they look alike and the brother use dark magic since its his powers, since she was made using dark magic the darkness forest (that said that any one set foot on it will eventually die if they don't have dark magic and if they do that monster will get them otherwise) since she's made of dark magic shes fine on the forest and that she was made 5 Years ago cuz she doesn't have any memory of it (also the girl from the light kingdom said that she have a dark aura heself you know cuz she was made it!, And they look alike cuz its her brothers magic) Its my theory and i will bet every thing i have taht iam right about it.
saw someone comment why she was giving cpr to someone with a head injury but the boy had stopped breathing and she found no heartbeat, the first thing you do as a medical professional is cpr in that situation, a human can survive only about 4? minutes without oxygen getting to the brain whether or not its a head injury without oxygen they would not come back. There have been some cases of people surviving without oxygen longer but as a general rule of thumb its about 4 minutes plus she was timing the situation beforehand. In the time era shes in *which i assume its likely Victorian* not much can be done about a serious head injury besides hoping it heals, with the little equipment *none* she had she did the absolute best possible means of getting the boy to come back to life cause he was DEAD no pulse and breathing.
the chapters are out of order but its an interesting story