
Something funny and refreshing. It’s not always we get the POV from a seme, more so, a spirited, kind and cheerful personality? And his ‘childlike’ nature is just so adorable to see.
It’s just a refreshing sight and a fresh breath of air. I’m liking this more as I read it. Plus, his innate sense with kids is adorable! He’d make a great father figure.

But so is the bottom. He’s not as bad as the sister, he did try to be honest with the sister about his feelings for the top, but when it didn’t go his way because the top respects his sister so much.
The bottom then decided to play along with the sister while the sister thought she truly had him wrapped around her finger.
The sister is devious. She knew before getting into the marriage that both of them have feelings for one another. That’s like fighting a one-sided battle, and then still gets disappointed with the end results when clearly there were signs.
The sister didn’t confront her own brother about knowing about the situation, and just talked about it.
I get it, in the bottom’s case, he felt like he was being hidden. But in real life, there are closeted people who are still hugely afraid of their family’s reaction when they come out.
Either way, it’s a messy situation for all but the victim in this is only the top. He was kept out of the truth and emotionally manipulated both by the bottom and his own sister.

But I also am getting this eerie vibe from him. I think he needs counseling and therapy. The constant mood swings.
He admitted to breaking the boiler just so he could get the bottom to come to his house. That’s a sign of an early red flag. The settings are cute because the atmosphere was designed cutely, but I kid you not if another artist redraw this to have a horror setting.
“Ah… I couldn’t call you, I didn’t know how to get your contact. So I broke this boiler and hurt myself in the process.” = sounds like how obsessive and how far the top will go to get the bottom.
Even the “don’t leave me, I can’t live without you.” Sounds suicidal.
If the bottom ever breaks up with him, I can imagine the top turning into full red flag or even black flag and trapping the bottom just so he won’t be able to leave. “Now you can’t leave me. Cause I need you.”
Or, something like “I’ll kill myself if you break up with me.”
Of course, I’m not saying the story isn’t cute. But the top needs major counseling. He’s a bit too clingy and kinda emotionally manipulative.
Other than that, it was a cute story. I’m just scared of the top. That kind of top might do the unthinkable.
But then I remembered they’re still in high school and this is the first time our MC has ever been in a relationship with someone he truly likes. So, of course he will have irrational thoughts.
But it’s gonna be okay, sweetie! You won’t just break up over some distance, if you guys are meant to be, then it’ll show <3