
Author could have made a very thoughtful provoking chapter on internalize racism by minorities.
Obvious-fcking-ly, my nigga would be the one facing racism and racism-induced bullying in S.K, let's be realistic. However, author could've shown that he already was racist towards Asian and how he believed that the bullying was justifying his reasons. Showing that a victim isn't necessarily free of faults and can also be wrong. This would've actually been educational and interesting.
Instead author made a fabulation of """"""reversed racism"""""" just to make an excuse to call a black man a nigger. Like this is basically San E screwed level reasoning.

The writer omits to give enough exposure on the characters, the setting, and just overall enough details on the plot for me to care about the MC's struggles and comprehend the plot. They took show don't tell too literally. Here, we know she wants to prevent her upcoming execution but the sovieshit fiancé already broke off the engagement, so why didn't she just ran away? She said she doesn't want revenge so just go? She's clearly loaded she can just take off...

Yeah I saw someone explain the storyline earlier but that doesn't change the fact there's a lack of characterisation and an incoherent pacing so even though the translation is bad, I can understand why it'd be hard for a scanlation group to properly translate a story that is missing much needed exposure.

IDK Cheng qu, Cinian is so comprehensive. I would have personally write it like Cheng tells Cinian the truth but since Cinian is pregnant and pregnant people are hormonal, this could have drive him to stalk Cheng out of hormonal jealousy. At least that how I would have write it. I just feel bad for Cinian. He's been cheated on before so this much bring back the trauma
Great first chapter and since they did a timeskip but kept the past a mystery, it makes a great cliffhanger