YIPPEE it updated which means i can finally finish my hw
Dammit im so lost in the plot
- Brown hair and black hair were high school classmates.
- They both entered a writing contest before they were well aquatinted in which the first place won a great sum of money.
- After a while they started dating and black hair gave a page to brown hair of something he had written, which brown hair recognized as the text he plagiarized to win the contest.
- Black hair’s dad was in the hospital back then and he entered the contest to win the money and pay the hospital bills and brown hair because he wanted to keep a good reputation as a book editor’s son.
- He pondered wether to tell black hair or not (that he cheated on the contests) and kept postponing it, until one day he heard black hair’s dad passed away.
- Brown hair then blatantly avoided black hair because of the guilt and ofc they broke up.
- Now they reunited as coworkers in brown hair’s mom’s company
- They started fixing things and everything seemed to go well, black hair even wanted to write and publish some short stories (editor being brown hair) but his mom fell ill at the hospital.
- He wanted to drop the writing but brown hair kept it with an ongoing status against his will
- That’s were we are now, the black hair discovered that the project was ongoing against his will and he tells the brown hair that is just because he still feels guilty about cheating on the contests way back then.
Wait when did Haejin find out that Sunwoo plagiarized his work?? I totally missed that
THANK YOU
I can’t pinpoint the exact moment but it was mentioned in the process of them reuniting. That’s why in this ch Haejin says something along the lines of “stop doing things against my will just because you feel guilty”
Tbh i want her to end up w the white wolf
Why?
I dint really like the black wolf
That’s a dumb reason. Hayate is helping Tsukina.
I know but i still dont like him srry
You’re not even listing any good reasons why you don’t like him. You just don’t like him because...what? How would you prefer the guy that just comes out of nowhere and proposes to her over the dude that’s been helping her find her self?
OH MY GOD i literally dont like him JUST BECAUSE i have no reason to hate him but i just DONT LIKE HIM why do i have to list reasons???? The hell???? There are none. I dont like him just because, i dont really need ti have a reason BRO also why do you care so much cmon man
Then stop reading.
????? Im not gonna stop reading just because i dont like one character. I still wanna know whats gonna happen next in the story
Tbh, same. I kinda find the black wolf to be older and in a dad way. He teaches her the ropes of being a wolf. I think the white wolf might be able to understand of struggling to fit in with society better like FL since he's a lone wolf himself.
Sometimes it's just a feeling you know? The vibes? "I don't like this" "because I like smth else" is good enough reason for a story. It's not that deep to get that worked up over lmao. You can not like a character but still read because they're too deep into the plot already and it's better to just see how it ends
Same the black wolf is like an older brother instead of a love interest plus him being the ML would be really weird considering he’s been like a mentor and their age gap
Exactly isnt he like 24
YEA and she’s probably 16 or 17 so like hell no
Tsukina is a 17 going on 18-year-old senior in high school. The white wolf is older than her too, so what the hell are y’all talking about?
Yeah but the white wolf seems way closer to her age rather than the black wolf
THANK YOU! Plus the white wolf is practically a stranger so there isn't a older brother dynamic (〜￣△￣)〜
Me too hayate is too old ;;;;
And you know Kirito’s age? Since he’s clearly old enough to drive, he has to be in his 20s, just like Hayate.
Well i think hes like 20-21 which is way closer than 24 and his personality seems way more "childlish" if ykwim. Plus hayate is like an older brother to tsukina so it would be kinda weird is they got together tbh
It wouldn’t be weird when she goes to college.
No... It wpuld still be weird
People are freaking weird
It was good but it has a lot of flaws. First the titls says that the mc is a pushover but we didnt see that at all almost??? Like maybe in the first chapter it was hinted that he was a pushover but didnt expand on that topic at all. I wouldn't be saying anything about this if it wasnt in the title bc it seems kinda unnecessary to put pushover in the title. Second i just cant feel the chemistry between them. When they first met and starting hanging out, we didnt get any scenes that you could say "awwwww thats so cute" expect the kiss scene. My favourite part in any bl is just the little cute moments they have like holding hands, blushing when their shoulders touch and just those moments when they get all shy and stuff. In the whole story there was maybe like 2 which is very disappointing. I get that theur relationship isnt the best but still. Third i cant really tell if they really love eachother. The lack of chapters is probably the maind reason for this. 15 mire chapters would have done the job. And also they always fight for no reason? There us so many misunderstandings that just seem forced. I get that no relationship is perfect and stuff but when the two of these fight its just do dumb. And its even dumber when they make up bc i cant feel the sincerity at all. Like when i rwsd these side stories it was so disappointing. Like they are now officially datinf and boom the ither day they fought. We didnt get to see their relationship at all. Which is also why i just cant feel the chemistry. Its such a shame tho i loveeeee the artstyle, its detailed bit not tok detailed for it to be realism. Overall, i dont know. The story and art had potential but it was executed very badly. It feels rushed at this point i bet the author was tired. The sex scenes were also lame, they tried to spice them up with rhe roleplay but it just didnt work. ANYWAY it was okay nothing too special but also nothing boring for me to say that u didn't enjoy readinf this and that i skipped to the end and stuff.
(also im kinda confused abiut the side stories cuz in the side stories we see the mls pov but i think that should be in the main story???)
Lmfaoooo the way im gonna die tomorrow is hilarioussssss and im gonna blame the new guy bc he ruined their beach date
Rereading this is hell the pages are so badly cropped