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Okay tbh I feel that in the first chapter the sister wasn’t supposed to be the villain that she’s being portrayed as, she looked genuinely concerned for her family and country and betrayed that Her sister would stand against what’s threatening the life’s of millions. ofc what they did to Fleta isn’t right and is never going to be justified but that’s not the point I’m trying to make it felt forced that the older sister is one of the antagonists. I understand the dad being greedy and everything for a fact what he has for his daughter isn’t love but obsession and a want to control her powers. The older sister did seem a little weird to me but thats all I wanted to say