She didn't really mean it but rumors spiral
Every time I see how stupidly huge his dick is I almost drop, but once I scroll past the smut, I'm reminded how funny it actually is sometimes
I really just want the plot to resolve
Idk if this is an unpopular opinion but the smut is just so repetitive
It's mid at best
And I just want it to hurry up, kill the grandma and move on so I can get some sense of peace and resolution after this depressing ass story.....
Fuck society, go live your life with your mermaid gf
Idk the last couple chapters kind of irritated me? Like I get it if he wants to have more sex
Sure whatever
But get her on that same page, don't do this bs
She's experiencing a stressful medical situation where her body has changed and no one can explain it or help her. That is until she finds out that semen is the answer and this guy is shooting blanks so he's her only real option
He AGREES to help her and then withholds what she needs for medical relief
Regardless of how he feels about their situationship, he's not communicating that so he's just one-sidedly abusing her situation to manufacture more desperation inside her that will make her feel like she NEEDS to fuck him more
I totally think that they would have consensually gone for multiple rounds even after he came inside her this last time
But the way it played out, it instead felt like he was extorting her, withholding a key part of their sexual agreement which made her beg for it again and again and again
He explains it after the fact that "oh we should see if just sex works and you don't actually need semen" and she accepts that, but it definitely feels more like an excuse to make her accept his behavior, even tho what he did violated the terms of her consent. Otherwise, he should have told her this before they did the sex.
Silly woman. I, the man, know what's best for your body so I'll just do whatever I want and explain it to you when I feel like
(Also, don't tell me it's "not that deep". I know. I don't want to explain why I think it's fun to break down harmful themes and messages I find in stories I read, even if those "stories" are primarily just porn)
Never talk to the police without a lawyer present
(I know this isn't the US so idk about your rights to not self incriminate in Korea)
That's a wild threat to be making in a room full of gays
If this has logical repercussions, he would become infamous in the local community and banned from most bars and events - threatening to out someone like that is pretty serious
So like . . . The original characters for the saintess and demon king from the game definitely switched roles somehow, right?
That's why the saintess is the burly guy and Eve is the demon king.
So how's that going to impact their relationship? Cuz Gozu's whole thing was his admiration and love for the demon king but Eve isn't really that demon king from the game, so . . . I know they'll work it out or whatever cuz their horny love can conquer anything honestly, but I can't stop thinking and worrying about it every time I read quq
It also makes me wonder if the saintess was originally a femboy or if there was also a gender swap thing that happened
The art overall just doesn't look as juicy as it did before . . . It's like a lot of the personality and details are gone
Don't like how they just didn't address how he got sexually violent that one time just because he didn't go penetrative.
I mean, the way he grabbed his face?
A partner who will grab your face like that when angry is just as likely to grab your throat. It is a strangulation grip, even if it's on your face and you are like 70-something times more likely to be killed by that partner via strangulation.
Also not a fan of how he takes revenge by "punishing" bottomboy in ways that could actually ruin his life. Public sex is not just something kinky people do willy nilly.
IT feels like the whole thing so far has just been 8 chapters of info dumping exposition
Since it's just explaining everything and nothing much is really going on, there's no emotional impact to anything. There's no weight to any of their thoughts or emotions because they immediately resolve and talk about everything so nonchalantly like it's no big deal.
It's cute and interesting but there's no real hook that's keeping me from getting bored.
Other predatory bs aside
When the childhood friend was like "why aren't you focused on sucking ma dick rn" when she was literally experiencing penetrative sex for the first time?
Like
God can his not be about you for two seconds?? It's bad enough that you moved in on a drunk girl and that your assumedly sober friend just joined in instead of stopping you (the actual biggest pos in this one), but you can't even prioritize her pleasure? Like . . . Idk there's such a difference when men are touching a woman to please her vs when it's written like they're touching her to please themselves and her pleasure just happens to be a side effect.
I've uploaded chapters on this site before but I've never been a regular uploader, so I might not actually know enough to say this
But I think a better upload system would be to upload a new chapter on top of their already existing placeholder (e.g. so you have both a ch.89 and a ch.89: PH) then go in and rename and change the position of the placeholder (e.g. rename ch.89: PH to ch.92: PH and move it to just after the placeholder for 91)
This way, the placeholders will always be greyed-out and marked as "already read" but the new, actual chapter will still be white, "unread", making it more clear to readers there is a new chapter that was uploaded, not just more placeholders.
As it is now, since I went through the placeholders, all the placeholders are marked as "already read", so when the uploader goes in and fills the placeholder with the actual chapter, it's still marked as "read" on my end, even though the new chapter was just posted. Based on the frequent confusion in the comment section, I believe other readers experience this too (tho I could be wrong).
Anyway, I hope that made sense QuQ