Turnip

IT feels like the whole thing so far has just been 8 chapters of info dumping exposition

Since it's just explaining everything and nothing much is really going on, there's no emotional impact to anything. There's no weight to any of their thoughts or emotions because they immediately resolve and talk about everything so nonchalantly like it's no big deal.

It's cute and interesting but there's no real hook that's keeping me from getting bored.

Other predatory bs aside
When the childhood friend was like "why aren't you focused on sucking ma dick rn" when she was literally experiencing penetrative sex for the first time?
Like
God can his not be about you for two seconds?? It's bad enough that you moved in on a drunk girl and that your assumedly sober friend just joined in instead of stopping you (the actual biggest pos in this one), but you can't even prioritize her pleasure? Like . . . Idk there's such a difference when men are touching a woman to please her vs when it's written like they're touching her to please themselves and her pleasure just happens to be a side effect.