Onigiri08's Manga

Her tiptoeing around him is putting me on the edge of my seat. He pretty much has her wrapped around his fingers.

I think there could be a variety of ways to explain the situation to the readers instead of it all being a conversation between the two characters every time...as well as more variety in the setting of the dungeons. It could be really pretty caves with a lot of imbedded gem stones, mysterious yet beautiful plants that could be used as ingredients for rare potions, underground waterfalls that have healing properties and can store in a bottle, making friends with animals that could either be just a cute fluffy pet or a fierce familiar that aids in battle. There’s so much opportunity for world creation that the author missed out on and it’s a shame.

Despite the lack of creativity, I love the main lead’s seemingly reckless attitude yet having a sound head on his shoulders. It’s really funny getting the healer all riled up because of his actions. Though if it were me I’d just be smiling and really having fun with his can do overpowered attitude.

The set up is very similar to Ranker who lives a second time. A journal that tells you information about the world and going through realistic tutorials to get to main floors. I have to say though, ranker who lives a second time has better spices and is marinated much better than this. I mean the emotion and realism is more evident in ranker’s return ESPECIALLY right up to the end of the first floor after the tutorial. I feel like the author breezes through certain details that could allow to showcase more heaviness and weight within the main character’s motives, actions, and consequences.

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