arizonoai's Manga

I-is this going to the direction that i think of?

Uhuh, just your cliche isekai webtoon here. The MC is a legitimate daughter that live outside the castle and when she's brought to the family, there is a illegitimate daughter that loved so much by her father and brothers. So far, this is just like your typical Mary sue webtoon that is so cliche my tooth hurts so much. The MC is your typical savage-21-century-unnie that is look so cool when she disregards all rule inside the royal family hahahahaha. That's not how you do it my girl, you have to do it slowly, gracefully, and elegantly.

The premise itself is interesting, but the deliver of the plot is somewhat lacking. How the plots are just pop out here and there annoy me so much. The author seems like to tell the reader how much the MC is strong willed and savage and so cool and etc, but is pitifully not done well. The villainess is just your everyday brainless girl that likes to oppose everything the MC did. Uhuh, you are right. SO MUCH PLOT HOLE. i believe this story' is a perfect background story for lilianne to comeback from her dead because of the unfairness. I mean, she didnt do anything that bad so far, she's too a victim from the deed of her parents' wrongdoing. The brothers is not doing well either, they are just brainlessly spoil the villainess to the max until she's so stupid and vile like this.

But overall, the art is good so i give it 2. I hope the development later will be a good one.

This manhwa doesnt seem realistic. I mean i know this is a fantasy story, but the characters is just so unrealistic. The mom is okay but she's just so fucking dumb, i mean she had the ability to survive by herself but she choose to be tied by that mf benjamin. And the daughter is the same, I MEAN YOU ALREADY LIVE ONCE BUT JUST WHAT THING DID YOU LEARN FOR THAT ONE LIFESPAN HONEY? DID YOU NOT BEFRIEND WITH THE MAID AND HEAR THEM GOSSIPING ABT CAPITAL SITUATION OR DID YOU NOT HAVE ANY SLIGHTEST IDEA TO REALIZE ANYTHING SUSPICIOUS WITH BENJAMIN BEHAVIOUR??

Eventho yes, you just know that your dad is still alive, i think with that much lifespan you should know one or two thing that important for your future but you just decide to tell your mom innocently and just going with the flow of that mf. OMG im so mad. The mom is just soooooooooooo regretable. She could have done better but choose to lie on her own, letting her only daughter be trampled by her own decision.