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So, ngl- I think it was alright. Maybe my tastes are degrading over many other mangas I've read but I'd like not to believe that to be true...? I'll give it that there was a lot of akwardness in the writing but... I think it was cute and entertaining to some degree. If maybe the plot had been given more meat to it, I think that would be better(?) ... though that is on the basis that imma ignore the comments about the age thing and on how convinient everything was... also, the intimate relations was probably not that necessary to the plot anyway (￣∇￣")
To me I believe it all is happening cuz she has some God/writer given charming magic, and everything makes sense
I don't know how many times I've read this now but everytime I come back to it, I feel a little more like a whole other perspective/ layer to the story is revealed. Tbh, at first I just really enjoyed the smut and the "romance" because hell yeah it was good. I originally came back to it with that impression but beyond that, I'm amazed how the story still felt lively despite the actual very depressing focus of their story. Momo's story felt so real and makes me so sad at that fact. Idk, maybe cuz its been years since I've read it so I have a better grasp in the content of the story now.