beta
probably lack of (good) editor or assistant beside the author.. so yeah thousands story and ideas yet they pulled the rushed cliche ending one since theyre too tired to continued without proper rest
damn.. too fast. is this an novel adaptation? since i feel like the pace of story is a bit rush for me. second of all, too many minor detail I can't ignore even the art is really gorgeous. as an example: During mc going to illegal auction I still doesnt understand how she just do a roundabout way for her to go inside when she just basically can make her own self invisible right after she sneak out further to explore like??? why just dont use it in the first place? isn't bit waste of mana or panel?
well, might stay longer to knows if this become better or worse too since i kinda liked her