Ice31 May 20, 2021 6:11 pm

The story itself is fascinating, it seems to have a lot of elements; Bird clan versus Snake clan... Thousand year war. Enemies from two clans had a forbidden love causing them to suffered tragedy, leaving a child behind, one whose abilities had to be sealed and hidden amongst humans. One whose destiny can very well possibly bring peace to both clans. How all fates are intertwined, the falcon boy who’s branded as a sinner for trying to save his father. His father the last to see the girl’s father alive. Her father’s blood has healing abilities, it turned the falcon boy into the key to her full awakening, supposedly turned her mother into an immortal but possibly gave up his immortality in the process. She’s held captive and experimented on by the bird clan. Snake clan on the verge of extinction thanks to the birds clans cruelty, using them as food to mystical pets, slaves and playthings thanks to their beauty. Corruption in the bird clan seem to run deep.

I’m thankful someone tried updating this.It made the concept/core of the story understood to a certain degree.
Thank you!


Unfortunately since English doesn’t appear to be their first language or something they know very well it made it difficult/painful for some readers to enjoy or fully understand

Sometimes it’s difficult to find synonyms/equivalent words/meanings when converting words. Especially if it’s new to you.

There’s so many ways to say the same thing/combine words. Sadly the order of words and words chosen change the impression it gives off entirely

Ex: (in the beginning of chapter 5 it says) Excuse Us have an important guest to visit!

You would think the people walking in said those word themselves and not the establishment itself

If something like Excuse US, an important guest is visiting or has come to visit/Make Way suddenly an important guest has arrived

The scene would feel differently and both the people and security reactions would have a bigger impact.

Ex: (Ch 9 page 4) Once upon building Lei Feng Tower... That found out a stone weighing 750 tons...

Upon building Lei Feng Tower... They found a stone weighing 750 tons or While building Lei Feng Tower... They discovered a stone weighing 750 tons

The order/structure or words can be really annoying, writing is both a beauty and pain.

Giving the perspective, thoughts and intentions of characters/sceneries the way it’s intended isn’t easy.

It’s like making a meal, with or without a recipe, ingredients, they way they are prepared, cooked and presented are important for full enjoyment.

It’s like being hungry and finding a delicious meal but while eating it, accidentally biting into multiple lemon seeds. You’re left with a bitter aftertaste and reluctance to continue eating it in spite of how good it is.

That’s readers while reading a good/possibly amazing story with confusing translations.

Ice31 May 17, 2021 6:51 pm

Kyle is a clever asshole. He knew Elan would surrender if he made it seem like he didn’t care at all for his kids... If he showed even a bit of waver her threat would have been super effective and her and the kids would have been able to escape then the game of hide and seek would have continued again

Ice31 May 12, 2021 11:09 pm

Am I the only one who doesn’t feel I smart enough to make it if I transmigrated or reincarnated into another world?

    NINI May 12, 2021 11:14 pm

    Right, if I did it'd have to be a situation where I'm smart as hell and has the person's past memories

    Monie May 13, 2021 12:29 am

    My first instinct would deadasss ran away but i would die instantly if i do that

    Mel May 13, 2021 2:17 am

    They're lucky I know the basics of math. Adding- subtracting- dividing- and multiplying

    Ice31 May 13, 2021 4:55 am
    Right, if I did it'd have to be a situation where I'm smart as hell and has the person's past memories NINI

    Yeah if that was the case it’ll be possible to survive lol

    Ice31 May 13, 2021 4:55 am
    My first instinct would deadasss ran away but i would die instantly if i do that Monie

    My thoughts exactly

    Ice31 May 13, 2021 5:04 am
    They're lucky I know the basics of math. Adding- subtracting- dividing- and multiplying Mel

    Yeah everyone I seen so far is amazingly knowledgeable and skillful. True knowing basic math is a good skill to have. If you are ever given the chance to use it. I definitely wouldn’t want to be royalty. Maybe If it’s a world where solving equations makes weapons and tools manifest though that would probably be a pain.

Ice31 May 12, 2021 6:24 pm

Am I the only one who thought of Kagome from Inuyasha when the female lead said Sit...

Ice31 May 11, 2021 6:44 pm

Both Yeo and Kang were young and going through very different struggles.

Poor Yeo had so much pressure on him different from Kang. Having to work, take care of his little sister and sick grandma while going to school. Circumstances pushed Yeo to cling to Kang to protect himself, however falling for someone like Kang was inevitable.

He got a got scholarship, I think Kang secretly helped increase the budget for it and got a decent job. Shortly after life got more and more complicated, he learned his second gender was wrong, he was going to be a mom, was stunned but excited and tried to share it but due to a stupid misunderstanding was treated cruelly. Sister debut and couldn’t be reached as his grandma departed the world.

So many things happened Yeo couldn’t respond any differently in that moment. Kang wouldn’t even answer his calls.

I don’t like nor hate Kang. He was super dumb in his youth.

He was raised differently, being a dominant alpha from a prestigious family there’s a lot of expectations, pressure for perfection and neglect for basic normal interactions.

His lack of patience and ability to make assumptions was enough to pop a blood vessel.

Reading his misunderstandings was hella annoying. Like No You Stupid Dumb F***! Are you serious right now?

This dumbass has a hard time with basic communication skill.

I think of his older sister and grandfather in the beginning they were cold and rigid so not surprising

Communication skills is something that’s has to be taught or shown.

I won’t try to justifying his actions just understand his perspective.

More than once he turned around he saw his lover in a weird and coincidental situation with the same girl.

Someone he saw as precious and all his, supposedly “betrayed” him. He was cowardly like a child. He didn’t dare confront his insecurities and suspicions. Due to fear.

Fear and anger is what filtered Yeo’s word through Kang’s ears in that moment. The same is what made him ignore his calls. The same that made him leave immediately after a single call.

Instead of protecting Yeo, he made someone innocent suffer immensely. Someone who was loyal and kind hearted, a person he should have cherish a hell of a lot more.

Jealousy can make people really blind, stupid, unreasonable and dense.

I understand Kang suffered from sickness, withdrawal and anxiety due to the imprint he left.

Usually in omegaverse, a omega is the one to suffer if away from their bonded pair. This seems to be reversed.

That’s karma for his accidental cruelty.

Kang has a lot of repent for, I hope he doesn’t get off the hook easily.

The assumption Yeo was selling his body and cheating was truly messed up.

He shouldn’t be able to be intimate with him so quickly. Yes it’s be 8 years but they just got on some what decent terms.

We know they will most likely be together like other cliches but I want to see more sincerity and thoughtfulness from Kang. I want him to Woo him, work hard to gain his favor and look trust worthy and dependable. Be romantic, respectful and genuinely apologetic.

I don’t hate Kang, I feel both of them are fated pair who were drawn to each other like a refreshing breathed of air. Then life happened along with the wrong choices...

    xHelena May 11, 2021 11:43 pm

    D'you just write a bible?

    Gerdeen May 11, 2021 11:56 pm
    D'you just write a bible? xHelena

    LMAO

    Nu_nu_nu May 12, 2021 12:04 am
    D'you just write a bible? xHelena

    HAHAHAHA WTFF?!

    Ice31 May 12, 2021 5:31 am
    D'you just write a bible? xHelena

    That’s random me write a bible...

    Were you referring to my writing format? Or how much I wrote.

    I guess it is long and the gaps between each paragraph could resemble one.

    xHelena May 12, 2021 10:56 am
    That’s random me write a bible... Were you referring to my writing format? Or how much I wrote.I guess it is long and the gaps between each paragraph could resemble one. Ice31

    It's like you're writing a formal neverending mail to your teacher lol

    Ice31 May 12, 2021 4:22 pm
    It's like you're writing a formal neverending mail to your teacher lol xHelena

    Fascinating perspective, formal huh If this was truly an essay or letter it wouldn’t fall under that category. It would fail to reach that such a high mark since my writing context and lingo isn’t proper at all. If I didn’t know better I’d say my comment wasn’t actually read by you.

    xHelena May 12, 2021 7:27 pm
    Fascinating perspective, formal huh If this was truly an essay or letter it wouldn’t fall under that category. It would fail to reach that such a high mark since my writing context and lingo isn’t proper a... Ice31

    U r right i honestly didn't read it completely, but every few paragraphs I took a glance and it still looked so good & all fancy :p anyway it's cool how you write like that, tho tell me honestly... you probably have full marks for english

    Ice31 May 12, 2021 10:30 pm
    U r right i honestly didn't read it completely, but every few paragraphs I took a glance and it still looked so good & all fancy :p anyway it's cool how you write like that, tho tell me honestly... you pro... xHelena

    Lol Thanks for the compliment. Actually yeah writing was my best/favorite subject, I had relatively good grades. I’d write 4-10 page essays outside of assignments along with poems, letters, monologues, stories, plays etc for fun. I’m not that passionate anymore, If I was to write seriously there’s a lot rules and guidelines for grammar, punctuation, terminologies, editing, proofreading, rephrasing etc to keep in mind. Writing takes a lot of time, energy and thought so I prefer reading over writing now.

    xHelena May 13, 2021 12:25 am
    Lol Thanks for the compliment. Actually yeah writing was my best/favorite subject, I had relatively good grades. I’d write 4-10 page essays outside of assignments along with poems, letters, monologues, storie... Ice31

    So cool~
    Well thanks for the short conversation haha, you sound so smart and mature really, it's nice. Thanks again and goodbye :)

Ice31 April 17, 2021 12:53 pm

Am I the only one who thinks the noble who threaten No Name is dumb as fuck?
Like dude if he kills you and your friend there's no other witnesses...

He has no known name so if he leaves the town there will be no way to find him...

maybe I am wrong...

Ice31 February 25, 2021 4:37 pm

Thank you for all the work you did to translate this chapter, we appreciate you!

Ice31 February 21, 2021 9:15 pm

I need more this is so good. Anyone know any manga similar?

Ice31 February 15, 2021 3:03 pm

Sigh he needs to just forget the story he read the book events and couples changed a long time ago

Ice31 February 11, 2021 6:03 pm

I was hyped for a second, he finally noticed... Nope....

Felix is awesome, he loves Issac so much he's blindly sweet. Willing to accept his child as his own even if it wasn't.

Seeing him speak up for Benjamin was enjoyable, his strong connection to Benjamin is probably due to their blood relation though.

He's protective of them both, he and Issac must be fated pairs.

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