.... No thanks, I like to do my own work
beta
If you like smut with sprinkles of plot then you may enjoy this.
If you didn't read story ignore my message, it's bias, I'll mentions many things from the story so I advise stop here is f don't want spoilers.
I'm ranting because feel frustrated...
The start and idea had so much potential to be an epic smut with a great plot, from the start but the delivery comes across a bit lacking
I don't hate the initial intention of ML not wanting to be alone and finding someone like him... Saving her was great start...
There was little to no patience from the ML.
Instead of the cowardly manipulation due to insecurities that she wanted to escape the unknown territory, after being abandoned, sold by the only family she ever knew and treated like an slave... Using her and wounds to make her meek.
Typical no communication but expecting her to Understand and Obey You BS yet also be Assertive and put Others in There Place... Like how?
The whole chambermaid BS that could have been Corrected since you actually expect her to become your "wife". Even saying what's mine is yours doesn't clearly let her know her Position -__- the whole process not in sequence in a chaotic way.
It would have been nice if he explained that he's different like her and showed his true self to her instead of taking advantage of her fear and anxiety of being abandoned again.
When he showed his form to someone other than her first I was so annoyed. Like isn't it common sense seeing someone else like her would fascinate her, bring her comfort so she would want to stay willingly. I get why her revealed himself in that situation but still how TF you decided life plans without any communication with the lady it pertains -_-
The comforting with pheromones element was nicest part so far I guess. It would feel like trash without even that element, non verbal comfort since this idiot is a handsome coward.
Which chapter did he reveal his form?
Ch13 page 89 begins the reveal but I usually do multipages
you put word into my frustration
Your so right w the whole miscommunication and frustration part but let’s also keep in mind that story like these (unfortunately) have these elements quite often as a plot point; yes it is aggravating but I believe this story is doing a lot better unlike other ones which include terrible aspects like hardcore SA and abuse from the ML @_@
I also think it’s a little too early to be ranting…there’s only 16 chapters babes. I do believe the ML def should’ve told her that he was also beastkin instead of keeping her in the dark and showing the crown prince before her but the crown prince is also his longtime bestie. I also hate when they have the whole “I plan to do blah blah blah with FL” without telling them but atp with these stories we have to accept that it’ll happen and hopefully not backfire on the ML & FL’s relationship (which is probably will happen bc the FL is obviously insecure in her position and NEEDS that reassurance that the ML won’t throw her away or get a wife)
.... No thanks, I like to do my own work
If you're a hopeless romantic then rethink this read.
If you like feeling frustrated and seeing people manipulated, stung along, going through emotional turmoil then this is probably a good story for you.
If you're okay with many smut scenes without real romance, closure, growth or character development feel free to continue.
Don't want spoilers stop here.
Sigh now I'll rant
At first I had hope "Maybe it's another wholesome Omegaverse" but nope.
Fateful encounter my behind, more like mere bad luck.
Another toxic overly stated secondary gender roles but this one like some others exclude Betas, due to lack of scent, they're less desirable etc.
I just started and am halfway through this but the damn omega seme is really irking.
Drugging was unnecessary, the things you said to get him to sleep with you was beyond sly. You're not in love just immature, twisted, cruel, selfish and possessive.
Playing with both people's feelings knowing damn well he's causing both pain.
That fake comforting when you're the shadow culprit behind everything is pissing me off.
I don't like the alpha seme much either, he's as dense as they get. They way he constantly fails to understand and express how he feels, poor upbringing, never received love and affection etc typical ass of ML.
It would be nice if he found a nice fine ass loving beta genuinely in love with him, not in those two game of tug and war and said F both of ya I'm out. Not likely but would be nice
Good Job for posting this! New readers need to see a comment like this to understand what’s happening and if they’ll enjoy it later. I personally can’t continue reading it but I’ll probably read the last chapter when it’s over because I put so much in this to get so disappointed.