I didn't like this. I didn't like that they ended up being together. The seme was too much of a jerk. He says shit like "I thought I would give up after the first night" but then proceed to calling them a whore throughout. Dude you're the one who wanted to have sex with them and came on to him don't be disappointed when he let you have himself. I'll never root for someone who's this emotionally immature. Uke deserves better and he needs to grow the fuck up.
That's cuz he thought the uke didn't refuse his advance even though he had a boyfriend
I agree to a 100%! The captain is a full fledged grown man, yet he acts so immaturely, if the seme was ugly nobody would give a flying fuck about him because of his bad and childish personality. He was overly jealous and as fast as he couldn't have what he wanted/when his love interest wasn't like he wanted, he decides to be a total a-hole to "the one he loves". And the uke even gets brainwashed in the end and says that he himself enjoys playing with men. I mean wtf, why did the uke start to like the seme when he even said he didn't like him!? Because of his good looks and his work, that would be my guess. God dammit ukes, stand up for yourselves! You certainly don't have to be the semes puppets grow a back bone.
I thought it was quick but very good still. The captain is Hot as hell! and I'm glad they ended up together. It was all a misunderstanding. The captain is actually a good guy and an even better boyfriend. Loyal and faithful. He just didn't know the truth. And when he did find out the truth, he ran right away and made things right!
This has been such an interesting read so far and even after the elf enslavement I intended to continue to read to see where the story go. (Also I won't pretend I'm above sexy time stuff.) However I was a little fearful when they were because I hate seeing helpless people suffer with no hope. I'm liking the way he handled it. I'm hoping they eventually become doted upon sexy pets. Especially now, considering that the clan knows the plans for the future. Here's hoping that they'll view the elfs as valuable parents for the next stronger generation.
Ha! (^~^) So is she interested him because he doesn't have a fairy and/or he proved his strength earlier with kicking and archery? I get the feeling they're gonna partner up.