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At times.. or quite often, I had no idea what was going on, where in timeline we were, or sometimes even what they be talking abut.
The story was somewhat of a mess, jumping back and forth in time (which is a big annoyance for me) But even so I liked it! I found it interesting enough and liked the couple. Also A x A is always a + for me (づ￣ ³￣)づ
And when I reached the end I was a bit upset, til I saw the author planning on side stories (▰˘◡˘▰)