Brett really said Queen never cry and locked tf in, the aura he had calculating how he'd get his pay back was so fucking delicious, i kept gasping with every smart line he uttered and when he told him to shoot himself baaaby yum yum yum I ate that shi up like my grannies cookies, and Hayden my baby he looked so exhausted I hope he doesn't suffer as much. P.s the guards searched brett so did he put the gun where the sun don't shine?
It's in the arm bandage....didn't u see it unfolding?!? So when he has first Ben checked in for injuries hd showed the medic where it hurts, but afterwards it wasn't in a cast just a sling. Then when he went home he wrapped the bandage around his arm along with the gun. Then after he got to Alexander's place he unwrapped it, then rewrapped it before leaving. And then unwrapping it again before heading to the hospital to see Hayden. He basically had a solid alibi for the "cast/bandaged" arm. So no one would have thought to look in there. I suppose that is where the sun don't shine also.
Sigh* what a waste of good art, I'm not saying the plot doesn't make sense for this genre the author chose, but I hope the next chapters get more creative and adds more depth to their character beyond the "Abused and can’t think for himself bottom and toxic obsessed top" we've read enough of that already so please give us something new please
Ikr like I get that trope is popular and authors use it to grab attention but it's so saturated atp that normal r/p with realistic plots are niche asf, I mean I'm not all saint like and pretend i don't enjoy bls that have red flags, but I need the storytelling to actually be interesting and the characters to have more depth than what meets the eye, and FOR THE LOVE OF GOD the plot to be the main focus for once rather than the overplayed rape scenes
LITERALLY like this just pisses me off- it's so much easier to write a fluffy realistic plot rather than a toxic out of the ordinary plot. I don't get why authors find it so hard to make it easy for themselves I'm speaking from experience when I say this; authors need to get a fresh perspective if they feel like going down a darker route. It's fine if it's only a bit (because writing an entirely fluffy plot isn't realistic) but if you feel you must, you need to ask yourself these things: is it needed? How far can I go with this? Will doing this in turn affect my mental health? What did other authors do and how did they end up? Pondering on these can help them make a choice better suited to their skillset rather than be a sheep and strain themselves. If they want to include smut, that's fine- it's totally up to them. But if the rape isn't necessary, they shouldn't.
Dude, i hear you. atp I just feel like they're utilizing ppls fetishes and fantasies which is pretty fucked up but nonetheless works, plus i assume it's easier for them to write shockumentary based plots rather than a deliberately constructed intricate stories with engaging characters. Sigh* seriously I feel like any author who intends to write any red flag, gruesome, psychological or thriller needs to read MADK for inspiration along with shit tons of pure Shonen ai and fluff just to balance it out, and maybe learn what the audience want instead of capitalizing on toxic trends.
Sigh* Author-nim can we please for the love of God get chapters explaining the supernatural theme of this manhwa besides the obvious click baits, we get it they're rapists, now let's see how those monsters came to be yea?