i don't plan on reading this again, i don't like how it is stated that he is a minor but it feels like they're just sexualizing him makes me uncomfortable ,also the mc is basically has the personality of a block of wood like it was stated that he was bullied when he was young and in school but when he came back his personality did a 160 and he acting completely different ,usually when a person is often bullied when they were young and in this case he never even awakened until he was 35 and up till that point he was used like a replaceable person since all he did was carry around equipment and collect the drops ,basically they would have low self esteem and would have carried it around with them but in this case you just don't see it. Even if he overcame his self esteem in that little of time you still wouldn't see an ounce of personality he isn't cunning or anything it's like a story just ready to fall apart because they just keep using plot armor
Maybe when this is complete I'll reread it and find it better ,but at this point in time it's not great at all.
i don't plan on reading this again, i don't like how it is stated that he is a minor but it feels like they're just sexualizing him makes me uncomfortable ,also the mc is basically has the personality of a block of wood like it was stated that he was bullied when he was young and in school but when he came back his personality did a 160 and he acting completely different ,usually when a person is often bullied when they were young and in this case he never even awakened until he was 35 and up till that point he was used like a replaceable person since all he did was carry around equipment and collect the drops ,basically they would have low self esteem and would have carried it around with them but in this case you just don't see it.
Even if he overcame his self esteem in that little of time you still wouldn't see an ounce of personality he isn't cunning or anything it's like a story just ready to fall apart because they just keep using plot armor
Maybe when this is complete I'll reread it and find it better ,but at this point in time it's not great at all.