WeebofLevi's Topics (185)

First and foremost, whoever made the story ATE that shit up! I love that there’s an actual story, and a good one at that.

To continue on to what I previously said, I love the fact that there’s twist and turns. In simpler terms, the plot is so fucking good. Makes me wanna shake ass.(Im sorry) I love the fact that the action isn’t overshadowed by romance. 6 chapters in I basically stated I wish there was more action. Instead of the story being 99.9% romance and 1% action.(generally speaking) Also love the fact the female “villain” isn’t a stupid and a generic villain. 30 or so chapters in im like “she ate that up ngl”..Normally, I’m always team female lead. AND STILL IS! But Aneta is such a good character! I love that she’s the mastermind behind everything. Instead of her being the generic side chick. She adds so much value to the story.

On that note let’s talk about Aneta..I kinda feel for her..It’s so fucked up what the royale family did. It’s so hard not sympathizing with her. Honestly, I hope they don’t just kill her off. I want both of them to be happy but that’s going to be hard. This just goes back into saying how good the story is. She has a good backstory and good reason to do what she does. Can y’all tell I love the story?Me sympathizing with the villain is crazy. She definitely gagged me! She did her big one. She’s not useless, or dumb, or annoying. She standing on big business. When she gagged Regina, she gagged me too. You don’t see a lot of cunning and smart villains.

In conclusion, love the brother, fuck the dad, and love everybody else.Love that everybody is included and actually plays an important role in the story. Everybody is actually used if you know what I mean. (The way I made a whole essay is crazy. Wouldn’t even do this for school)

If he plays with his nipples one more time..I’m actually going to lose it. At first, you know, I was rocking with it, but then it just got repetitive. I like that kinky shit, ok, so I’m not tripping too bad about all the sex scenes. In fact, I wish there was better sex scenes..The nipple play is killing me. Like, when is it going to stop?

The mc is ok…he’s ok. Nothing really too special about him. He’s relatable as hell tho!

Because fucking…NO! Why are we skipping over the fact that he was forced into a threesome?! Got me tossing and turning in my bed. I feel so…incomplete. Like…that’s all? That’s all he got? Honestly, he got let off easily..It’s so underwhelming.

The ending was just terrible…I’m well aware there’s going to be a side story, but I feel like it was a cliffhanger. The fact that the ML isn’t suffering any consequences for lying is mind boggling…I don’t mean some outrageous shit need to happen. But I expected shit to be talked about! Yk?.. honestly, it’s just eating me alive that he lied to him AGAIN! Ok, well, maybeeee I like that jealous stuff.Anddd maybeee I just want to see the top getting mad. THATS BESIDE THE POINT!

I just wanted more attention to how dumb the MC plan was. It’s more upsetting that the rape is downplayed. He seems so cool with it. Somebody else stated that they the artist/author made it seem like it was “consensual rape”. BUT LIKE deadass tho. The rape was just not talked about enough..And the fact that he was BASICALLY ok with sleeping with both of them back to back. Like…where is the guilty conscience at?I mean I know he didn’t have a choice don’t get me wrong..But I feel like in the back of everybody’s mind there would be a guilty conscience. You do have some people who don’t care, but based on his character he’s not like that. The problem is that he DOESN’T CARE! It’s poorly shown that he actually cares about what’s happening to him. Him lying still is eating me alive.

Like what was the reason? Don’t know how your comfortable drawing a high schooler sleeping with a literal child. It’s different if this was like a psychological drama, and or graphic trauma film. But nahhh.This is just out of pocket. It has such a good artsyle too. Do ppl like not ask family or friends if the plot is a good one? Or like if the story is written well.

You can’t lie and say that it don’t remind you of episode..

The artstyle is fucking phenomenal. What’s really making my ass itch is that the contract was bs..I’m pretty sure you can compensate when doing a contract. Literally the whole contract was one sided.I like freaky dinky shit but good lordt!
Nothing on the contract was in her favor fr..

Also, she’s lowkey slow asf. When he said warm the bed up every night. Why tf did she not think to just warm a pot up and rub it on the bed to warm it up?? There’s so many ways to counter half the list.That’s what’s really making my ass itch. IDK!
Especially with kissing every night! Correct me if I’m wrong, but he never stated it had to be on the lip. Honestly, that could never be me..
┑(￣Д ￣)┍Think smarter not harder fr. Like, she could’ve put pillows between him and her.

I think I’m more dumbfounded how she didn’t think of different ways to avoid doing “allat”. Everybody sayings it corny but that never crossed my mind till I read the comments.I’m just so stuck on that. Don’t get me wrong he fine asl good lord.
BUT FYM I CANT LEAVE??! Shiiii.. Let him blackmail her it’s wraps. She folding like a omelet. She going to forgive him in less then 30 seconds.

FOR HIM!..I’m ignoring every red flag. Word to my mother we’d have 8 kids by now.Fuck my family, fuck my friends, and fuck you too. Cause only god knows what I’d do for this man.

Been making my ass itch ngl. So, the father wants to be recognized as a father, but also wants to fuck the son? Shit got me itching omg. Don’t get me wrong I like the story, but holy hell.

YK WHATS FUCKING CRAZY AND MAKING MY ASS REALLY ITCH!
People like to get on the story “Miscreants and Mayham” and how weird their story is. But end up liking this story. Again, don’t get me wrong I like this story. Yk what nvm. LMFAOO
Seme calls him dad in bed.. I don’t even know why I compared the two. Miscreants and Mayham are on another level.

I can’t wait till the truth comes out..I can’t do love triangle’s for shit.Not to say the dad is the better choice, but the dad is the better choice.

I don’t even care about the translation.. I want to know what I’m watching. I was prepared for an obsessive, and aggressive smut. No type of translation would get me to understand the story.

I just don’t get the plot and what it’s supposed to be about. The author/artist was high off their mind. I couldn’t even finish the rest of the chapters.

There’s literally no way man’s is this stupid. Like that shit making my ass itch badly.

The pieces of the puzzle is forming right in front of his eyes and he still not getting it. God is dropping acorns and he still not picking sh*t up. (Madea reference) The answers are literally right in his face. He’s so painfully stupid. I’m butt booty naked reading it and he made me cry. Cause of how stupid he is.

The fact that his momma dead and he talkin bout his fu*k ass master. If he says master one more time. I’m jumping of a bridge and doing a back flip while I’m at it. Scientists gotta study his stupidity. That’s some next level stupidity ong. He keep saying the answers to his questions, AND HE STILL NOT GETTING IT?!?!

The miss communication is making my knees ashy. It’s so forced bro. If the author would focus more on the action instead of this bullshit you call romance..all will be well in the world. The first chapters should’ve been him in fantasy, then him realizing weird sh*t that’s happening.( I know that most of everything I said is taking place, but man’s is so god damn stupid. It’s always master this, master that. It’s literally killing me.) Most people would try to figure sh*t out, but man’s is colorblind.

I love how the author didn’t make any bullshit excuse on why the seme is obsessed, and or toxic. I like how it’s more in depth on the seme’s “illness”. I also liked the way the author described it, and the way they drew it. Also the fact that it wasn’t some generic shit like mommy and daddy issues. Ok, we ’ll, it did have mommy and daddy issues, but with a hell of a lot more.

This is my perspective on the ending part.. I don’t think he was “TOO” forgiving like other toxic stories . I think what I liked about it was that the uke understood the place the seme was coming from. Word for word he knew how the seme was feeling, and processing the situation. I feel like it was more of understanding, than letting himself get walked over. Maybe the way I feel is because the author drew and described his anxiety, jealousy, and fear so well. LMFAOO. I think it was just different than how other toxic stories describe the semes jealousy. Most of the time it’s bullshit, and I end up dropping the story. (I can give you a whole book of stories that got bullshit semes and bullshit excuses )

Maybe what I like about the story is that the uke wasn’t some shy, innocent, easily forgiving person. Instead of the uke saying “you can walk all over me” and what not. It was more of trying to get to the semes head and letting him know how much he loves him. Basically showing him that he’s not by himself. Maybe not THE healthiest way but definitely a lot better than others. LMFAOO.