haven’t read it for a while but did see in the comments people were upset so I looked at the recent chapters. honestly disappointed in this author. I hope it ends well but i’m no longer interested.
I wanted to drop it but I didn’t. the author did good it just wasn’t my taste.
I really loved when the seme said
“if they ever write a book about my love life it’ll be filled with only you from cover to cover”
it made me smile
For those who remember the chapter 5 but see it's gone now it's because the uploader didn't get permission so I'm assuming they were told to take it down.
i’m almost speechless. I read the whole thing simply because the story was chaotic and all over the place. the author was putting 10 plots in one and I was hooked. in my opinion it deserves 4 stars for simply making me laugh.
I thought it would be long since it had 83 chapters but it was too short but also perfect. a story where everyone accepts your love, how lovely.
I think it was good it wasn’t perfect of course. it started well and then there was an unexpected bumpy road. I enjoyed their story. I didn’t like how the best friend was controlling and manipulative and that was never talked about. i do like how the mc had many realizations but if i were him I would’ve let it all out but he was right for choosing to keep their friendship since his best friend didn’t know. but I think he knew. their friendship is kinda dark and I think there was way more baggage to be discussed. the story was great until the author had the almost rape scene, it was unnecessary and lead to a forced confession. i hate how authors think rape is the only way a seme can express his built of emotions. also, I like that they gave him a POV since we could see more of his thoughts and story but I didn’t like how long it was, i found it distracting from the build-up. i know they aren’t perfect and over time I imagine that they would be more open about their lives. the art was great and I loved the semes body, as long as they are happy and healthy I have no big complaints. oh except I enjoyed how there are sexy scenes but I would’ve preferred it be fully shounen ai, the clouds were too much for me.
I hate sounding like a lecturer but far as I know shounen ai is supposed to focus on romance over the sex scenes, even if there are some scenes it'll either be cut out or clouded like in here, even nipples are sometimes censored smh. If you're looking for the ones that only has light sabers instead of whole clouds go for Yaoi.
I understand the difference. I found that the use of constant clouds to cover sex scenes was a bit much in the story and it being fully shounen ai with hand-holding and kisses alone would’ve been best. i’m also fine with blurred sex scenes this just had a lot and I found it distracting that’s all :)
The book is good so I'm happy to see more illustrated!!
can you give me the link to the nobel??
https://www.dropbox.com/s/302p12irv69gsk3/With%20or%20Without%201%20-%20Without%20Reservations.pdf?dl=0
This should be it if not lmk :)
tyy