
this story is very interesting and had great potential but this is not how a true sub/dom relationship works. especially if this is seen as a second gender and not a kink, it should be written better. there should be proper consent, a safe word, a dom's job is to make the sub feel comfortable and safe, a sub should want to be dominated not be forced. you start slowly and learn about each other's limits and comforts, punishment should be arousing and fun, not something that scares you. this story is still interesting it just upsets me how the author isn't properly representing how this relationship works.

There is a difference between a punishment and a funishment. While every relationship is different is a DS relationship where there are set and specific rules that a sub must follow (like no master bating for example). Again, every relationship is different but my purposefully going against the rules a sub will usually get a punishment, not a funishment. Punishments are not meant to be fun and the stricter the dom the stricter the punishment will be. Just another thought, wveything else you said is correct. Also I’m not the best at explaining so I hope i did ok

that definitely makes sense and thank you for explaining. i know that disobeying means being punished in a way the sub doesn't enjoy but puts them in their place from continuing to act out. however, the sub in this story has just started understanding his "second gender," in my opinion, the dom should have approached the first punishment differently. anyways i'm just acting biased based on my own experiences but thank you very much for helping me :))

I think, the manga represents this way, becasue in this the sub/dom thing is not a kink. I mean, when someones have their first time together, they know, what would happan, and what to do, but in reality, they don't. You know the mechanism and stuff, but not the exact thing, you just try and with time, you learn. They just don't have the knowledge yet. The sub didn't even know the safeword thing, he didn't know that there should be one or two. He is kind of an idiot, and I live for it. :D The dom have more knowledge, but I think, he wasn't exactly aware what it means to be a dom and what and how he should do the thing in the right way. He has the urge, he has the feeling, and he is a teenboy, who wants everything immediately. The word "instincts" is a nice way to describe it. In first, they just went with it, now they do it consciously and in a safe way.

i’m dying. the way the mood in the comments drastically changed when the red-head first appeared compared to now.
i know taesung is trying to protect bom but he needs more confidence, not every person that smiles at bom is the enemy. also, taesung is already fine but if he ages like his dad he will forever be a daddy.

why would you start an incest story and then complain about it having incest. no need to give it a bad review if you knew you weren’t going to like it from the start... i feel awful for azuma, his world revolves around his brother and he loves and cherishes miyabi, to find out he’s been faking is a blow to the heart. it’s just what if miyabi never relied on azuma would azuma’s feelings still be romantic. does miyabi love azuma in the same way or did he just not want his brother to live without him. i wonder how this will end.

i liked the story but you’re telling me that guy that had feeling for the sunbae just disappeared and let go. what was the point of the backstory if the childhood friend never even returned. i was waiting for a whole face off in a game. anyways this could have been long and a great story sadly it went from middle to very end.
the art is beautiful and i love this story but what is actually going on. each chapter in a whole story of chaos. the purple hair guy deserves a win. and i’m sorry but fluffy deserved better. overall this is amazing!
I cried when Fluffy was killed. He wasn't evil, he didn't hurt anyone. He just loved his master