Plot is kinda splotchy and not very well thought out it was getting there but it’s just too hectic for there to be a smooth progression
Don’t know why it has such a high rating but it’s probably cause of the art
I’m probably not gonna keep reading beyond chapter 24 but I think that Sophie is a dhampir with a human and trump which would explain why he was able to control the other vampires included the elite pure breeds
I’m also glad the stuff with ul doesn’t seem to be turning into romance cause they don’t really have chemistry imo
Since I know you won't follow this anymore cz the plot is meh, imma spoil you a little bit more then
They're spoilers from the other series
Sophie is not TRUMP, teacher Krauss is
Sophie is Allen's great great great grandson, so Krauss "helped" him and turned him into immortal against his will
Ul is not Dali's son and definitely not Raphael's half sibling, he's Angelico's half sibling instead
Ga Banri is Sophie's uncle, he's the one who named Sophie
Raphael's dead, burned by Krauss
Angelico's dead, also burned by Krauss
Ga Banri's dead, killed by Ul
Sophie turned 'evil' in the future
Anything else you wanna know?
I think a lot of the readers may have caught on by now but I just wanted to say my thoughts on the matter of the Saint’s blind following
It’s heavily implied that there is some sort of attraction magic going on that makes the people who have a long term exposure with her infatuated with her as a being. This magic however, does not work on everyone which is seen in Carol(blonde braid bands) and the blonde guy in student council. It seems like the attraction magic has to be compatible with the person its affect which may be from the magical compatibility of the person it’s affecting or some other prerequisite for it to be established.
This magic affects reasoning and makes a persons thoughts revolve heavily around Liz, the saint. This was shown with the fiancé of the women bad mouthing Liz (the one with macarons). The finance of the man supporting Liz stated that he started to behave differently and would into tell to her about Liz.
The man the party was for momentarily breaks out of Liz’s attraction magic and gains reason for a moment but quickly goes under Liz’s spell again once she interacted with him again.
In the most reason chapter(23.2) the MC points out that Liz seemed to be ignoring what was going on with the bullying rather than being too dense not to notice. This along with many other moments shows that the innocence and naive front Liz puts on his merely a facade to perhaps cover up her selfish or even evil nature.
I personally feel like it’s possible that Liz has been possessed/reincarnated as well like our MC which would explain her unnatural behavior. But it’s also quite possible that her nature was just selfish from the start without any external interference.
The recent development with the possible involves of Laval seems interesting too since it suggest that Liz’s connections or influence has reached outside the lands of their nation (which is interesting since it seems like the political system has the nations more guarded and isolated [stated that there is no exchange of information or goods between their nation and Laval])
Interesting progression of the story and the character Gil adds a nice balance showing the MC’s personal side. I find it distasteful and boring when a character gets dumbed down to a single goal (which in this case would be being a villlaness) but this story doesn’t exactly do that. Although it’s come close the existence of Gil as well as the prince and his attendants brings a sense of balance between her as a person living life and the goals/ideals she is working towards.
Personally the age gap doesn’t bother me since the romance was already established with his character introduction but I am worried that the story might focus too much on their romance and make the MC out of character as a helpless heroine (which she has stated she didn’t want to become). The progression of the chapters does make this seem more unlikely which is nice
Holy Yap alert
Thank you for reading if you have, please lmk what you guys think I think the recent progression is pretty interesting
I mostly agree with what have you said. I just couldn't get the parts below (and can't remember from which chapter):
[This was shown with the fiancé of the women bad mouthing Liz (the one with macarons). The finance of the man supporting Liz stated that he started to behave differently and would into tell to her about Liz.
The man the party was for momentarily breaks out of Liz’s attraction magic and gains reason for a moment but quickly goes under Liz’s spell again once she interacted with him again.]
You can read some of my observation about Liz on my reply to Vero_nica post titled: Liz sus (just 2 post below yours)
Another people with unknown true self are Finn (blond guy, light magic) & Curtis (long hair, green magic) self proclaimed friend of prince Duke. They always seem neutral, Curtis helps Alicia in investigation and rarely be seen together with Liz while Finn can be mostly be seen around Liz & even taunts (not sure if right word) Liz about her unnatural facial expression. I wonder what are their role and true self as they seem unnafected of Liz's magic.
Henry on the other hand really falls for Liz but find's it unnatural as well as he now supports Alicia. Prince Duke secret shadow for Alicia, Mel also seems not a fan of Liz which is rare, including her cousin blond braided Carol.
I have like 2 ideas rn the first being that the spell only affects users that don’t have a strong opinion on the person trying to set the spell (so perhaps the prince already disliked Liz) or 2 something to do with the prince’s blood/lineage making him more immune to the magic (which makes sense since the 2 girls that are his spy’s and in Alicia’s side are related to him)
In addition to that, what's with the cracking something (glass?) visual effect from freckles girl that made her realize that it was her anger directed towards Alicia, not going through Liz excuse / way out was her real feelings. Was it only visual effect for us to understand the situation of her realizing? or was it showing us something spell breaks?
I tend to avoid these plots but sometimes I pick them up cause I’m in the mood to
I don’t like how deceiving the beginning was also I was pretty excited for the golden retriever light bdsm trope but whatever… not sure if I’m gonna continue
If I knew what to expect it wouldn’t be too bad but I feel like I already had like expectations for what I wanted from the story which was broken cause of this progression
Usually for stuff like love triangles I have a clear preference or an idea of what the character should choose but for Ran she really is in an awkward situation lowkey don’t know what I want with Kaya him ending up alone is kinda anti climatic and I don’t really want him to date Ran or any other girl
I’m hoping Ran ends up with Nasu cause it’s the best for her but also I don’t want Kaya to end up with any girl other than her? But I don’t really want Kaya to be dating Ran either cause he keeps crossing the line
I high key don’t like the art style change I really liked it before, I feel like I might drop this cause the MC looks too different for me to want to continue it feels like a different story I really hope they go back to their old art style
I binged all this in a day and now I’m lowkey regretting it cause I’m not sure if I even want to continue
It kind of feels like I just threw away my time and wasted my day
I don’t know if it’s cause I’m super serious about keeping my personal and school life separate but I literally couldn’t stand reading about how the FL was fucking up his relationships, public image, and reputation. Even if your dead you should still have some consideration for those who are still living
I can’t stand her I actually would smack her and beat her up
The ML is hot and so WAS the FL but if this continue I’m either gonna drop it or only read for the smut
Hmmm maybe it isn’t that serious tho lol. Also I think the reason he didn’t have friends, a bad social image and kept to himself was because he was being terrorized by ghosts half the time. It doesn’t really seem like he minds making these new friends- he just seems not used to the change (and not being in control of his body). But yea you should drop the story if this is making you upset! I’m sure there’s plenty of other stories out there that will be more up your alley
Lmao what??? I feel like you’re just saying these things to say it because how is she ruining his relationships when he never had any with those 3 girls to begin with??? His reputation and public was ruined way before she went in his body because he can see ghosts whaaat instead of what you’re accusing her of doing she’s helping him clear misunderstandings between those 3 girls in his class or wtv…you don’t need to clarify that you’re only gonna read for the smut because it’s clear you did
Just because the outcome is unintentionally positive doesn’t mean that it was justified for her to act however she wanted in his body ESPECIALLY since he kept telling her not to do certain things
I understand that she could’ve been excited because she had a body for the first time in a while but her whole attitude surrounding his body possession is just pmo
I promise you it’s really nawt that deep lmfaoo in the end he wasn’t even mad at her so why are you this pissed of? acting like she went and killed someone in his body when all she did was talk to some girls in his class and help him make friends even with his reputation at rock bottom. He was also jealous of her personality sooo…whyyy are you acting like a level 100 empath on a SMUT story when all they do is fuck
Hey yo you gotta chill with the attacks bruh
Eats popcorn*