Lavender March 22, 2024 8:34 am

It may be just me, but it feels like any interesting or big problems or obstacles are resolved in two chapters, while the small, insignificant stuff lasts forever (most of the school issues seem irrelevant to the story).

For example, they constantly hint at the aunt and uncle being hostile but never directly address it and when an incident does occur it's solved almost instantaneously. (it feels dropped/forgotten and then picked up again at random times through the story)

In regards to the dad subplot, there hasn't been enough development up to this point, and then suddenly they have an argument and she blows up at him for one chapter. Only for them to not even follow up with anything other than him crying (like that was a huge emotional bomb dropped and we are just not going to acknowledge it??).

Going forward, my prediction is that they're going to gradually have him do things for her, to convince the audience that he's a 'good father', but it'll mostly be superficial stuff like helping her clean up (fix her hair, dab her mouth), or buying/winning her something. Additionally, the father will probably be hurt or nearly die, so the MC realizes that they really love and care about him (I call it forgiveness without the effort of redemption trope). There will be little to no communication until they are unable to avoid it (possibly when she cracks her mother's super-hard research and uses it publicly later).

I feel like a hater. However, there is just this feeling that the author keeps coming up with new ideas and subplots for the story, but forgets to include/maintain the existing subplots.

    Toji’s gf March 22, 2024 10:57 am

    No, don’t feel like a hater. It’s honestly very valid criticism and I 100% agree with you. Because it does feel like the author constantly added new subplot meanwhile completely forgetting the actual story and the already on going conflicts and subplots— it’s honestly kind of getting tiring and annoying to keep up with it all.

    Lavender March 22, 2024 10:52 pm
    No, don’t feel like a hater. It’s honestly very valid criticism and I 100% agree with you. Because it does feel like the author constantly added new subplot meanwhile completely forgetting the actual story ... Toji’s gf

    FR. I feel like they do the same thing with characters as well because they keep adding random characters/friend storylines and then we don't see the character for 10-20 chapters and when we finally do it's all of the characters at once ╥﹏╥

    They wrote 3 potential knights/bodyguards for the MC (yellow-haired guy, redhead guy, and black-haired girl), then completely scrapped them since her dad is acting as her bodyguard, and now they just randomly bring them all out at random points in the story, even when only one would suffice (which ngl it's funny that the yellow guy and redhead are ALWAYS a pair).

Lavender March 21, 2024 3:10 pm

oh Maythan, forever being caught in the closet. (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ Also, Big shoutout to Jae for demonstrating that when it comes to annoying a sibling, younger siblings will stop at nothing!

Lavender March 21, 2024 7:00 am

Idk about y'all. But if someone invites me to dinner and then serves me ants on a log, we fighting.

    Syade March 21, 2024 8:03 am

    This made me crack up all the comments here are literally OUT for Diana (she deserved it tho, nasty bitch

    Crystaltwirl21 March 21, 2024 8:52 am

    And after the long travel too I would've expected a hearty meal (︶︿︶)=凸

Lavender March 19, 2024 10:18 pm

Welp... I can tell this is going to drag out forever this was an opportunity to hint at the misunderstandings and make things less toxic, but I guess magical dick cures Anaphylaxis

Lavender March 17, 2024 3:10 am

1 in 3 chances to find a lover
1 in 3 chances to find a brother
Could be both, Could be one
You won't know until you're done

    LeiaAi March 18, 2024 10:26 am

    One with hair of red and luck of gold
    One with locks of silver and face cold
    The third of magic great and mane green
    A sword to bloodlines find with black sheen

Lavender March 16, 2024 12:22 am

Does anyone else roll their eyes whenever an ML seems angry/surprised about an MC's mistreatment/being used like a tool while they do the exact same thing? Like???? You also treat him poorly and only use him for purification? Why are you shocked that others do the same?

    Fujoshi_Mom March 16, 2024 8:48 pm

    He didn't beat uke up like the yoon household though

    Lavender March 17, 2024 3:03 am
    He didn't beat uke up like the yoon household though Fujoshi_Mom

    He does manhandle him, drag him around and is aggressive when they do purification though I think not hitting someone is pretty bare minimum stuff

    Novaklavier July 15, 2024 11:14 pm
    He does manhandle him, drag him around and is aggressive when they do purification though I think not hitting someone is pretty bare minimum stuff Lavender

    I mean he does acknowledge this point himself, that he loses it sometimes and is rough. But he definitely does not treat MC like others do. ML still treats him with respect afterwards instead of literally throwing him away and not even cleaning him up. He doesn't treat him like a slave and tries to make things more comfortable for MC.

Lavender March 14, 2024 4:27 am

I remember when I used to feel excited when I got the update notifications for this story......

Lavender March 13, 2024 10:42 am

The MC is hella strong because there's NO WAY I would go out, after hanging a severe allergic reaction My ass would be in bed because that shit is no joke

    Itzz_A_Trap March 13, 2024 11:24 am

    Fr, I legit got too close to my mother who had nut breath and I was bedridden for the rest of the day

    Lavender March 13, 2024 12:13 pm
    Fr, I legit got too close to my mother who had nut breath and I was bedridden for the rest of the day Itzz_A_Trap

    FR. The MC is fighting mind over body right now because his body would be EXHAUSTED after that. The fact that he drank a bunch too and went for multiple rounds of sex is insane. It would be great if the ML saw the hives and freaked out, stopped, and took care of the MC. But I doubt that would happen.

    Kyun~ March 13, 2024 12:44 pm
    FR. The MC is fighting mind over body right now because his body would be EXHAUSTED after that. The fact that he drank a bunch too and went for multiple rounds of sex is insane. It would be great if the ML saw ... Lavender

    Yup, this is accurately accurate

    Drane March 13, 2024 12:46 pm

    He is very strong.

    Kyun~ March 13, 2024 12:50 pm
    FR. The MC is fighting mind over body right now because his body would be EXHAUSTED after that. The fact that he drank a bunch too and went for multiple rounds of sex is insane. It would be great if the ML saw ... Lavender

    When the ml saw what hidden under the MC's turtle neck I'm pretty sure he would think it's an hickeys he got from other man. Man this is kinda predictable

    lla696308 March 13, 2024 1:02 pm
    Fr, I legit got too close to my mother who had nut breath and I was bedridden for the rest of the day Itzz_A_Trap

    I almost died laughing when you said your mom had nut breath. I have never heard it phrased like that. I would need my epipen immediately

    Itzz_A_Trap March 13, 2024 1:19 pm
    I almost died laughing when you said your mom had nut breath. I have never heard it phrased like that. I would need my epipen immediately lla696308

    I just drugged up and passed out for 12 hours, I try to avoid stabbing myself

Lavender March 12, 2024 3:19 am

The way I don't care. Like ok, so you had reasons for your behaviour as a kid and before meeting the MC as an adult. BUT HE'S SUCH AN ASS. There was no reason to be such a d*ck and manipulate the MC later in life. I'm not going to even touch the rape and imprisonment but outside of that, he wasn't even a good person either. like huh? why are you forgiving him?

Lavender March 11, 2024 5:00 am

MC wakes up every day and asks himself what is THE WORST possible decision I can make and then does that

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