Does anyone else roll their eyes whenever an ML seems angry/surprised about an MC's mistreatment/being used like a tool while they do the exact same thing? Like???? You also treat him poorly and only use him for purification? Why are you shocked that others do the same?
I mean he does acknowledge this point himself, that he loses it sometimes and is rough. But he definitely does not treat MC like others do. ML still treats him with respect afterwards instead of literally throwing him away and not even cleaning him up. He doesn't treat him like a slave and tries to make things more comfortable for MC.
The MC is hella strong because there's NO WAY I would go out, after hanging a severe allergic reaction My ass would be in bed because that shit is no joke
FR. The MC is fighting mind over body right now because his body would be EXHAUSTED after that. The fact that he drank a bunch too and went for multiple rounds of sex is insane. It would be great if the ML saw the hives and freaked out, stopped, and took care of the MC. But I doubt that would happen.
The way I don't care. Like ok, so you had reasons for your behaviour as a kid and before meeting the MC as an adult. BUT HE'S SUCH AN ASS. There was no reason to be such a d*ck and manipulate the MC later in life. I'm not going to even touch the rape and imprisonment but outside of that, he wasn't even a good person either. like huh? why are you forgiving him?
It may be just me, but it feels like any interesting or big problems or obstacles are resolved in two chapters, while the small, insignificant stuff lasts forever (most of the school issues seem irrelevant to the story).
For example, they constantly hint at the aunt and uncle being hostile but never directly address it and when an incident does occur it's solved almost instantaneously. (it feels dropped/forgotten and then picked up again at random times through the story)
In regards to the dad subplot, there hasn't been enough development up to this point, and then suddenly they have an argument and she blows up at him for one chapter. Only for them to not even follow up with anything other than him crying (like that was a huge emotional bomb dropped and we are just not going to acknowledge it??).
Going forward, my prediction is that they're going to gradually have him do things for her, to convince the audience that he's a 'good father', but it'll mostly be superficial stuff like helping her clean up (fix her hair, dab her mouth), or buying/winning her something. Additionally, the father will probably be hurt or nearly die, so the MC realizes that they really love and care about him (I call it forgiveness without the effort of redemption trope). There will be little to no communication until they are unable to avoid it (possibly when she cracks her mother's super-hard research and uses it publicly later).
I feel like a hater. However, there is just this feeling that the author keeps coming up with new ideas and subplots for the story, but forgets to include/maintain the existing subplots.
No, don’t feel like a hater. It’s honestly very valid criticism and I 100% agree with you. Because it does feel like the author constantly added new subplot meanwhile completely forgetting the actual story and the already on going conflicts and subplots— it’s honestly kind of getting tiring and annoying to keep up with it all.
FR. I feel like they do the same thing with characters as well because they keep adding random characters/friend storylines and then we don't see the character for 10-20 chapters and when we finally do it's all of the characters at once ╥﹏╥
They wrote 3 potential knights/bodyguards for the MC (yellow-haired guy, redhead guy, and black-haired girl), then completely scrapped them since her dad is acting as her bodyguard, and now they just randomly bring them all out at random points in the story, even when only one would suffice (which ngl it's funny that the yellow guy and redhead are ALWAYS a pair).