The way the author portrayed the scene and moments. It feels like the air is being vacuumed from my lungs, I feel suffocated. Just by reading it and looking at their expressions, the color palette and font texts even helped with the atmosphere. You can really feel how it slowly becomes intense each chapter. This is amazing, and I really look forward for more chapters.
Joshua saying that scar was from appendicitis surgery really caught me off guard LMAOO. That’s nowhere near the appendix, how come Chase didn’t question it lol.
I just wish each chapter has their own comment section so that whenever I reread masterpiece like this, I can read comments about the chapter and I won’t feel a little lonely when I find something funny lol. ┗( T﹏T )┛
The way the author portrayed the scene and moments. It feels like the air is being vacuumed from my lungs, I feel suffocated. Just by reading it and looking at their expressions, the color palette and font texts even helped with the atmosphere. You can really feel how it slowly becomes intense each chapter. This is amazing, and I really look forward for more chapters.