The storyline is too fast paced and jumpy, art is degrading every episode and bad translations
The episode where she was introduced as the guild master is poorly executed and quite confusing. It feels like the author is trying to give her all the hidden jobs to make her seem strong n badass
Holy this translation is so damn good, perfect flow and the words/speech match perfectly with the webtoon
She's gonna die, I'm pretty sure she's gonna fie
Which she? The elf?
Idk her name, the lady in the white outfit, last panels
With white hair???? Or silver????
Lady that was originally in the room with blonde, the one that volunteered to go to the journey
Oooh,darn i thought the silver :(
Does anyone know any other scan teams that translate this or the scan team that uploaded the version of chap 47? I'm really sorry but I can't deal with the bad flow and weird gfx's
Why would someone repost another translation of a chapter that's already out?
Probably you didn't see my previous message or the message of the second page of the chapter but I was uploading and they uploaded on me without permission. So after we discussed we decided to work together and I uploaded the chapter I was editing with the translation of both translators. The other chapter gonna be dropped and ch48 is coming very soon ❣ thanks for your time
If possible could you guys consider sticking to black font or one color? Idk why but all the dialogue color changes were really distracting
I will keep it in mind. I tried colors cuz officials have many colours :3
Ooo okok got it
Did the art change? It looks so much more flat now
The art at the very beginning was so organic and pretty!
Jeexus, another good story ruined by the fl becoming a damsel in distress, who cannot make any rational decisions.
She literally has the entire military force behind her (commander) and I bet she's just gonna leave without telling anyone. If she actually follows that fake princess, I'm gonna drop :/
That’s the problem, she doesn’t trust him enough smh smh smh
Tbh this is what I think when people say "it's the inside that really matters" ik it's wrong but people should really balance the inside and outside a bit more instead on only focusing on one part
Quick review
Too fast paced, certain scenes are just skipped over n not developed, MC is weak with strong underlings. No character development at all.
The MC is weak to the point where he's a literal wallpaper during fights. I get that he is a cook, but shouldn't he feel the urge to at least train a bit endurance, or learn how to use a sword???
All he can do is stand there to get stabbed while the seal has to turn back every 3 seconds to block an attack for him
Even the time where he decided to scare off the mercenaries, it was so out of the blue and our of character, afterwards it wasn't even developed properly. He just turned back to his oldself saying ohh I wanted to protect you once
Characters are introduced for 3 chapters then they disappear. None of them were developed and you never really relate to them or feel closer. Even the elf, I still barely know any information about him even tho he was introduced to the party a few chapters in.
Fights are really fast paced and the pacing doesn't makes the deaths of characters sad. It's simply 3 panels. [Gets killed, someone lunges out crying, and "Noooo (name)". I feel absolutely no sympathy for it.]