And my previous rating for the whole thing was literally
"I wish they'd both just date each other (MC and Violet) and these stories be taking the long and complicated way to get their objective"
It's a story that's js a tiny bit complicated bc our MC isn't able to differentiate the love she feels towards her sister , unfamiliar on whether or not it's romantic love or familial love, but she never act on the love itself as romantic, crossing her sister's boundaries.
Now MC and mamiya's love are a quiet one, it's more so like a comfortable love that takes its pace and isn't aggressive, which is a rare kinda relationship in the romance genre.
The people who's freaking out in the comments are insane imo this story is so unproblematic that it's weird people are even fighting abt it.
Sure in terms of characterization and world building, it is a little flat because a lot of the lore are discussed very surface leveled, but it could also be because the main climax and twist of the story is yet to come.
Overall on ch.96, I'll give it a solid 7.5/10 , it's engaging and entertaining enough to be read fully but might reveal some plotholes when you read deeper. Would recommend tho!
Is there any romance/ harem I should look out for? There's none in the tagging but I wish tp confirm before starting this lol
I'm seeing wayy too many death flags and like doomed flags from the way these characters worded things bro.... I'm scared
But atp it's frustration.
dohu is not wrong.
Juheon been the one WHO HAVE NO FUCKING COMMUNICATION SKILLS, he doesn't tell anyone what he's feeling Abt decisions that's made and when said things happened, he'll talk shit to dohu like dohu's the one who forces him into stuff, when he's the fkn adult who can't speak up for himself.
He had a problem with dohu's past actions, tells dohu not to contact him and is shocked dohu indeed doesn't try to contact him before he blocked dohu.
Saw someone in the comments saying "oh it's juheon who's been giving his all trying his hardest to make sure their relationship stays afloat boohoohoo"
BITCH DID WE READ THE SAME DAMN STORY AT ALL??? since the start of this story, juheon have been carrying himself with 0 attachment to everyone. He's been saying shit like "no one can understand me but me" since fkn chapter 2/3 , and the only person who actually contributed to their damn relationship was dohu, dohu stayed with him trying his best to understand and accommodate juheon while juheon was processing through his issues and that's great! We love partnership! But the moment juheon finds an issue with dohu's actions, his first thing to do was one sidedly yell at dohu Abt how fcked up dohu is (literally bringing up things dohu only ever told him bc of dohu's own trauma btw) and he expected that after putting that shit on someone, dohu should be able to say his piece instantly and not even given like some time to process all that shit. Then he lashed out and told dohu not to contact him, so dohu doesn't, until when he does try, he was already blocked.
Then juheon just disappeared. Like kapoosh .YOU WERE GIVEN GRACE IN YOUR BEHAVIORS AND WERE COMFORTED WHILE GOING THROUGH YOUR TRAUMA BUT THE MOMENT SOMEONE ELSE'S TRAUMA AFFECTED THE WAY THEY BEHAVE YOU RUN AWAY ??? yea sorry I don't have the vision some of y'all is seeing of
"oml juheon never did anything wrong, why are people calling him an asshole?"
Girl he's a jackass.
Fuck ts dohu pls de-attach yourself from this man and go live life I feel like advising a friend who's in a toxic relationship to get out
No actual establishing of our characters and their backgrounds, just jumping over one meeting scene to the next , it's really is showing author just wanna see scenes and not actually a story
"father will make sure your brother is safe"
THE MOMENT BRO SAID HE CAN'T KILL HONG KNEW IMMEDIATELY
WHAT YHE HELL IS THIS ANGST.
UFKC WHAT IF THAT WAS MY LAST STRAW MY BABIESSSS
I'm praying so bad for there to be no end game girl and no girl at all if not the classmate. Like GET SEO ARIN WEAK ASS OUT OF HEREEEE ,,,, I get that's she's realistically scared and fawning due to her circumstances but she genuinely irritates me with her meek damsel in distress architype the author got going for her.
Also legit the Ma ceo guy and his subordinate is so weirdddd like they're bad bad ppl even before the world went to shit and they constantly use the word "bitch" for women it's giving misogyny, as per usual with Korea ig
loved the plot and how it's going, but EVERY SINGLE PERSON that he has actually functional interactions with outside of family is all women. like the hell, I'm happy for more female casts compared to male casts in action, but the taste it's leaving in my mouth is the exact shit i taste when i stumble upon harem actions and reverse harem stories. like, even one i thought was a guy, the guild leader ruina, boom actually a girl in disguise.
an suspiciously strong demon offering external help? women demon., like where's the male casts at bro... i genuinely feels like it's lacking
also the sigh of relief i let out when it's revealed that it's teacher x teacher romance and not a literal child chasing after an adult is insane
???? you're HEALTHY AND IN GOOD SHAPE, why was that scene so clunky??? YOU yourself can make runes when it's fun and games but when actual fighting comes you're hella ass?? IT'S A HIGH PRESSURE TIME BUT YOU'RE HERE CONTEMPLATING WHETHER OR NOT YOU'LL BE A BROTHER FOR THE KID??? WHAT. i thought you said that you were strong??? why did you perform well in fights that isn't as reliant on you winning but when you're facing someone YOU'VE BEEN WARNED ABT BTW?? YOU'RE SO LOST AND SLOW???
i get that this is supposed to be an emotional scene and stuff but it genuinely infuriates me when a character WHO'S BEEN HIGHLY COMMENDABLE, reacts slowly and illogically when it's pretty easy to think how to act BECAUSE AGAIN, THEY WERE BOTH WARNED ABT SAM.
(i love the story guys, this is a genuine confusion)
truly author how can you fuck up your own story like this... kazusa went from "imma be a respectable partner who values my partner's agency and opinions and trust them" to "my 'friend' can't respect my relationship, so imma sexually harass my partner to show him who's boss" liks what the actual fcuk
thru his dick. like this ain't even "let your dick do the thinking" his dick IS his heart and brain atp.
it's always the same thing of "we need to ve wary of this one specific guy" to "OMG HE CAUGHT US OFF GUARD" brother....
i love this story but come on...
idc abt any other couples besides our main rn. with the big ass relationship problems as of now, i don't give a double doggystyle damn abt noona and kid
??? why is your sister previously fucked stardom an instigator for you to go into the idol world and now that you're already quite famous and debuted she starts throwing stuff and tantrums at you?
and instead of thinking that doing more gigs and being more famous will make your sister more mad, you think she's going to be relieved of her trauma and sense of loss??? no???
like what a weird conclusion and train of thoughts. i wonder if this plot line was thought on the spot. imo it's better if we redirect the plot for the character back to what it originally was, him being easily influenced by online and fans centered emotions thay burdened him to a point where he is depressed.
