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but she's just a bit too naive for my tastes i think , i was trying to love her quirks and all but it feels too much of telling rather than showing ykwim?? i mean it's more so like I'm reading a novel with pictures rather than reading a webtoon rn and sure that can be fun as i do enjoy novels but this one is too much "quirky girl narration" for me and while i understand she's trying to be potrayed as being young spirit here, I'm literally the same age as her and i thought it was too corny , like someone who's never meet an 18 y/o tryna write abt an 18 y/o