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if sowoon is actively writing like as the days come, why the fuck is the work handed like as a one time shit ykwim like he gave the TA the work already and the story is unfolding as it goes and it's not like he gave him like a daily update or smth so is the story just a prediction of the days that come leading to the other guy leaving? like imo there's so many like weird messy plot holes going on like a lot. hence why j feel like this is bad writing. it's a great concept for sure and the art is amazing but author should really re-examine their story flow again