lowkey feel like there's something that happened between the hunter’s association or whatsoever leader and mc’s father
My best guess is that it would be between her and the guy selling drugs since he talked about having been in love once before
mid, first couple was bland while the second couple had a bit more personality so it’s interesting but it’s messy considering both their fucked up nature
this shit be messy af it's nice but heart-wrenching as hell
this is honestly so interesting! i’m quite happy that it wasn’t a time slip like mc initially believed, it was nice to see that the reason wasn’t something out of fantasy but something actually plausible like it can totally happen. the amnesia was a nice touch and explains a lot more! i’m very interested in her lost memories.
why do i feel like this is a unique case of a priest corrupting an incubus /j
that dungeon must be hell. i’d never want to be there
The whole story is a walking cliché and normally I wouldn’t even mind bcs clichés can work when they’re done right but they keep tossing in random, completely different tropes like they can’t just stick to a few and actually develop them. It’s like they’re collecting tropes for fun like bro ever heard of consistency??
It’s all over the place. The pacing’s a mess, the development feels like it was written by a wattpad writer from like 2015 and the cringe is really really starting to kick in, second embarassment is real lol.. I was trying to be patient but chapter 19 was my last straw I’ll try to pick it up sometime again but arghh