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It's ch 47 but it all seems very fast to me, Idk why. I feel like we have holes in the script, idk why to.
aand for God sake give Dan some frieeeeends! he's like a great human being, how is it possible to not have 1 close friend?! Now he'll be all alone in the world owing JJk! (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ I hope they offer him twice as much at the other gym and as Grandma will have already passed away Dan won't give a damn and just accept the new job and pay off his debt in a short time and get rid of the horse. He soon finds out that the bald bad guy is actually a green flag and stays with him (until JJk's redemption emerges) Dan will be all sad, the green flag bald guy will help him not sink COZ SOMEONE HAS TO HELP PORR DANDAN he can't give up on life !! (oh maybe potatoes and the actor boyfriend) we don't have many characters ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ