Zara want to read (All 122)
beta
this was okay :/ all that built up tension too. i hope the author is okay and that they’re not sick or being harassed bc it seems a bit rushed. the censorship paired with how buggy she looks and his deadpanned face are also taking away from the moment
literally such a let down. the more i think about and remember the tension from before it’s even more of a flop
and why’s he so expressionless? ik that’s his character but with how much he was yearning i expected to finally see his true feelings
why does she act like a baby