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As much as I love this story, I am getting tired of the miscommunication and lack of character development. When will ANYTHING happen? The last 5(?) chapters are all the same (to me). Maxi walking around the castle, seeing either the princess or Riftan or both, Maxi gets jealous or insecure, rinse and repeat. Also, she has had no development, and the miligram she did have is thrown out of the window, for SOME reason.
PLEASE, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD! LET SOMETHING NEW HAPPEN!
Just sit down and talk at least, idc if it's going to be a wall of txt at this point.