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ok, i take it back. It's still a bit cliche but with a nice twist that's handled quite well actually.i like the development between the siblings, as it's going slow and steady, and gee, i sure do hope it doesn't turn out weird like that My Body Has Been Possessed. I'm assuming the first ML is the white haired guy but he's looks so much boring that I like it. It's a nice break from all the usual storyline and characters of game stories.
tldr: it's usual story but written well so far