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So I re-read chapter 6
After having had the experience of working while my partner doesn't have a job and honestly, while I can see all his faults, I empathize enough to find the overall story a bit cute
But when the guy was calling his boyfriend 'stupid' I thought it wasn't exactly well explained, in my opinion he was like "my boyfriend doesn't even realize how much I love him and I don't want to worry him with the toxic and hellish work culture at my job, he's silly" idk. Better explain it so the reader doesn't doubt his love yk??
And also, when they made up, the younger guy had no business saying sorry or whatever
Maybe I'm still too immature to understand that part, but
Even saying I forgive you here wouldn't have worked
I broke up with my partner bcs even when he said he understands, he didn't and it would turn into fights, so the scenario where the younger guy understands honestly feels like fantasy to me XD