I actually dislike our mc design
What's up with that one moon shaped hair on her forehead that doesn't move
She somehow feel more like a doll than a human
Rereading and i noticed he killed Iron to make him his soldier
We could argue it's self defense, but not really
He orchestrated it.
From that red gate, we really saw he was losing regards for human life
I have to say, if they were created by the same thing as this kindergarten project, then aren't they all brothers..? Sure is a lot of incest
I would have rather Tehir beat the shit out of Kimoto than this rape scene TT
It's insane that this story managed to make me love the first storyline with Charin, and keep me invested for the storyline with Kimoto?
How do you go from peak to peak? I went from eating it up to eating up, and it's honestly impressive.
First time "I'm home" sounded like "I'm gonna fuck you"
I'm on chapter 3, and this is so toxic relationship coded,
Like being assaulted, and hurt but remembering how much of a good guy he is when he's his "true self"
Man
She goes from dick to dick but it actually advances the plot, thats so crazyyy
Yk what would be good, if the empress was a lesbian
And she just joined Agnes's harem
If she must be held accountable for her lack of interest and actions, then Heiner must be held accountable for the choices he made
Like, lying to her face and maintaining a facade of peace
I'm pausing at the end of chapter 54 for now, I'll be back
Heiner is like -no.-You cannot force me away.-I will not go.-I will stay! I command it!
I'm at chapter 42, so 50% of the available chapters. I feel like i read a very longue prologue. Genuinely, there's a lot of repetition in this story
We seem to be restating what we started with, over and over again
Currently at chapter 42
he has a grudge against the qingcheng sect but the only reason why that guy threw him in the pit of snakes is because he killed their young master, and proceeded to be defiant when caught- like
These guys were the enemy of your enemy, you should have made them your allies （/TДT)/
Currently at chapter 21
And I think
He killed him because the request was pulled? Like out of pettiness?
But he could have approached him and tried to understand who even made the request
I havent finished it yet
But people complain about a beach ending when its relevant narratively, since Inwoo has a trauma with water
It's really hard to tell if I want to be with Jiho, or if I want to be him.
He's so fine!
And his men are so fine too!
Ch69
Imagine getting assaulted by a fan and your lover gives you shit for it
It's the perfect Madonna-whore complex
Mason the adored untouched virgin, the hero
And Haley the slut, with a sensitive body, great stamina, well placed piercings
It's seriously funny how Noah can just get the best of both worlds, and none of the issues
Also it feels like their mutual attraction is only based on their first meeting and that's
Yk, I think presenting Noah as this guy that doesnt value his own life, and has no real interest besides from Mason is.... well.
It reminds of this quote like
“what if you met just the right man, who worshiped and adored you, who’d do anything you say, who’d be your devoted slave? Then what would you do?”
Wednesday: “I’d pity him.”
Plus, I want to say: narratively, Noah being suicidal doesnt work
Especially when the guy didn't even realize he was in love with Mason until later, didn't truly pour out his heart before- and now suddenly it's "stay with me or I'll die"?
It doesnt fit