Flexible as hell WOAHHH putting that figure skating exp to insane use good for him!!
At least he has a way to keep in shape while on rest orders
Banger sex scenes per usual wow i hope before they get together there’d be some grovelling from the incubus
HONEST LIPS DOING GODS WORK RN YOU ARE NOT FOOLING ANYBODY JERRYYYY RAHHHHHHHH ilya one of the most productive and efficient ml i love u so much thank u for ur service
literally TT
“Ailette’s waving at the air again :-)” HELP MEEEE their dynamic is so funny god… does anyone have the novel i cant wait anymore TT
Heart when BOOM BOOM BOOM in every single physical interaction they had oh my god yunshin resting his head on seheon’s shoulder every chance he gets is so so domestic and cute ohhhhhh i had to stop myself from yelling at how cute they are TTTT and the lil clippy hair pins AHH yunshin u are so wifey….
And yunshin getting sick with worry at seheon knowing his sister’s situation… Oh yunshin sweetheart if only you knew that seheon is standing 10 toes deep for u rn hes ready to leave the damn firm for you i promise u got nothing to worry ur pretty lil head about
ch32…. Love the official tl thank god for that but i really wish they’d kept the honorifics TTTTTT UWAAAAAAA especially with how many times the other hunters (especially jihan) would whine and call seo yoon “hyunggg hyunggg” TTTTTTTATTTTTT
Also the size difference is bazonkers my god… my GAWD…… bless your soul yoonseo had this been a yaoi tagged story your twink ass would have been obliterated
Theres a lot of potential with this story but everything just fell short. With these fantasy tropes, you’d hope it would hit At least one of these marks (interesting worldbuilding/plot, well written mc, solid couple chemistry) but this story hit none of that. Plot was lackluster, mc was poorly written and ml was just a nothing burger for 80+ chapters. Ml was supposedly obsessive AND possesive but why did it have no flavour? No salt no pepper no msg nothing. It felt blasphemous lmao the romance also just doesnt make sense.
The whole theme of finding closure in new friendships and experiences amidst grief and survivors guilt was done so poorly(?) (didnt get to know the names of mc’s old friends and their characteristics is so.. hilariously sad LMAO) and the potential to have it center more on the new friend group was wasted bc… thats the whole point of mc’s grieving. Instead it focused more on the mc and ml’s non existent chemistry which usually i’d love (if they have the chemistry!) but when u stand back and think about the overarching theme (and how the couple met which was lowkey blackmail lol) it kind of doesnt make sense at all? Other commentors highlighted the jarring-ness of the romance pretty well too (a solid 5/5 for ml’s desperate, anxious wrecked expression in the confession scene though lol def could go 3 more chps for the ml’s self reflection arc)
Maybe its Something about the way the artist adapted the novel that made the visual translation so odd. Maybe the novel is better, who knows, but still it doesnt make me curious enough to pick it up and read it. The dungeons grew repetitive and the whole world building about it felt like it had no weight to it since no solid rules or lore are established about the world. Story and ending was rushed and the panels/atmosphere and romance was jarring.
Tldr: Overall, its a good story for a light quick head empty read and a bad one if youre expecting a well written plot (๑•ㅂ•)و✧ IMO If youre looking for a story with the same suicidal mc x op flirty ml with the bl dungeon hunter trope + a compelling plot and theme (but better) then just go straight to Mission Save the Hunter (Death Delayed bc of The Will).
yeah i found that the self-reflection confession scene kind of came out of left field,,,, it felt like he was talking about wanting to control all of him (in what felt almost romantic /adjacent/ if any romance at all to me) a few panels ago and then BOOM ‘i can’t live without you’ (which is an i genre taly very romantic thing) ???? but i agree on it being a fun light read if you’re into this trope
You just gave me the review, that I needed. I was so confused as I was reading it (didn’t finished it) because it felt like it lacked of sth I cannot explain and you just explained it well! “Death Delayed Because of The Will” (the novel was so worth the read) definitely changed my standard towards this type of trope.
100 percent agreed I was ranting to a friend just about this comparing it to the amazingly written death delayed because of the will.
Lowkey the only time I was genuinely enjoying the story was when there was very clear and in your face foreshadowing that mc was manipulating the ml to allow him to kill himself. There were seriously too many times I was shouting at the screen in frustration wondering why the author didn't explore this part or that part more bcs the story really could've been so much more better. Too many parts were underwhelming and rushed to the point where I judt wanted to finish it hoping it would eventually get better.
just finished the novel and im begging everyone to either let it marinate or go read the novel https://booktoki347.com/novel/1954461
This is thee shounen ai yaoi we all fawking deserved trust me on that. Self sacrificial mc x clingy flirty golden retriever ml lovers this is for US!!!
Some spoilerish screaming bc i will defend jihan with my fawking life:
Jihan may seem arrogant and insensitive at first but i promise u he is the best and sweetest ml ive read in a while!!!!! Keep in mind that all this is happening bc no one knows who yeonsoo is and what went down in the great dungeon! Once its revealed and they interact more? BAM Absolutely head over heels over our yeonsoo and is shooting his shot every damn chance he gets!!! He is such a golden retriever pathetic flirt I WILL DIE FOR HIM!!!!!!!! Its such a satisfying dynamic bc both of their views on “justice” will change the more they spend time with each other its so so good. Its a well written story exploring the topic of grief and justice, the plot itself is so engaging, and all plot points are addressed (the angst and grief had me crying LMAO) and Yes; its shounen ai so its mostly kisses from the couple BUT i swear yall jihan’s flirting makes up for it the way their banter had me kicking my feet……… its just so natural, their relationship progression feels so Real and not rushed. that “ideal type” banter theyve got going on? Yeah that shit will hit so good in later chapters AHHHHHHHH please… please let this work birth a fandom… i need fanfics of them.. fanarts… ANYTHING FAWK
When will the ML know that our MC is suicidal? And that he is only doing the will left by his comrades and is planning to k*ll himself afterwards? Is it almost there?
I love your comment!! Thank you for defending Jihan I'm sad reading comment that say they dislike Jihan. How did they come to that conclusion, sometime I wonder if we are reading the same thing?
Bcs we all only saw his asshole side
judging by the pacing the manhwa has, its gonna be quite a while, im not sure. Rn, jihan is just puzzled on “Why” yoonseo is suicidal. And that curiosity (clashing values) is gonna make him want to interact with yoonseo more! (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
Right but i get them as well, its the extreme protectiveness we all felt for yoonseo bc of what he went thru :’) cant blame them! But the immense dislike to the point of dropping it is such a shame, majority of the vibes that jihan is giving is like that of a kid pestering the one he likes for a fight just bc he likes them annoying, childish and incredibly clingy LMAO
And the fun in seeing jihan’s development is how much he changes his act when he finally Knows what yeonseo is going through. And this applies to everyone in the story who’s treating yeonsoo’s absence rashly and insensitively. So excited for Jihan’s (and everyone!) reflection arc (๑•ㅂ•)و✧ cant wait for the angst!!
They shouldn't drop this, just a little more and they can see how careful they treat yoonseo later, saying he's very weak at the moment(because of the healing skill resistant)
and so on later despite the fact that yoonseo can literally defeat them any moment.
After reading your spoiler, I can finally say that Kishiar(from turning, yeah I am reading the novel and now in chapter 600+) now has a rival for being the best ML ever.
I wanna read the novel but don't know korean
Open in chrome and use google translate. That's the only way we can read for now
Read halfway thru the novel (i was fighting for my life with the mtl yall) and jihan… JIHAN… my BOY!!!!!!! homeboy got me kicking my feet hes such a shameless cheeky ml god i love him so much i will die for him EEEEEEE author aced the perfect black tsun aloof cat mc x shameless pathetic golden retriever ml i hope the novel gets picked up by a tl team soon, even with the mtl it still had my heart aching with the angst ahhhhh yeon seo my beloved..
Where do you read the novel? I’ve been looking for it
https://booktoki347.com/novel/1954461 here u go!!!! Sending u strength to overcome the mtl but its definitely worth it i enjoyed every single chapter
I’m sorry but how to do mtl? Do I just copy and paste to google translate?
Im not sure for other phones but iphone has this “translate website” button on the bottom left corner of the window so i just mostly depended on that :’)
Oh shii fr? Say lesssssss I’ve had an iPhone for years and didn’t know this
Anri’s character is so satisfying to read lol i love me a (true) scheming, conniving twink!!!!!!!!! Humble down all of em and use that milfy twink beam to good use! The end summary for each chapter is so helpful and hilarious “we learn that jorga is in possession of a weapon of mass destruction.” LMAOO never stop op