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I can’t see a way for the mc to fall in love with the ml, like until now it was all guilt trap…and if we do indeed get them together in the end, I wonder if he would seriously develop some sort of feelings (due to stockholme syndromes) or it will be just deep guilty.
I do wish he is set free from everything tho, from all the characters I do feel the saddest for him. ‘Cause at least the ML got the time to live normally after he left the mc, but his obsession run so deep that he can’t let go.
Maybe it will end with one of them dead or together or an open ending, I am not sure.
But I am so surprised by how well the author made the ML, he is super pretty, very handsome but still that doesn’t blind me, who is pretty biased, forget that he is doing something extremely disturbing and scary
I personally like the story, and the speed. This may mot be some your cup’s tea and that’s ok!
But I find it sad that some of you do compare it to other stories, like I get it, it doesn’t have the same pace or plot twist like you all are used. But in the end this is the author story and not mingwa’s and so on.
I personally still believe this is not a story for people under 20s, it’s a gem for those who can appreciate and it’s boring for others who doesn’t feel the appeal. Which it’s fine!
To each it’s own, but can we leave the comments section about the plot please…It’s very sad how comments lately, not just this manhwa, stopped being about the plot itself or frustration, just an interest about the plot idk, I do miss those days wjrn it used to be like that, maybe I should just let it go and suckup lol
agreed
I feel that every comment is valid. Criticisms and reviews through comments are meant to help authors do better. Sure, she won't read them here, but as a writer myself, I find them very insightful when it comes to how I want to approach my own work. So many people got confused about the chain of events in this story, si I now know to be very careful on how I work flashbacks into my own story. For some, it got boring because we had so many flashbacks that the story didn't advance by much, or because the gang life we were led to believe the story would be about, was mostly told in nothing but flashbacks and when it was told in the present timeline, no one had any idea wtf was going on. Or because one character is shown a lot less than the other (mostly a TJ vs Jo thing). Comparing it to other works comes with the territory. Can't help it. One thing editors ask me is "what other book out there, is similar to yours." and I'd like to tell them my stuff is unique, but the truth is, we're all drawn to a specific type of stories, so the comparisons we make are only natural. Personally, I hate a comment section that does nothing but glaze the story or author (like on Webtoon).
agreed