
Tbh when I read the raw and not understand what they was saying. I kinda feel bad for Aubrey death. But after reading the dialog.Wow, just wow.(⊙…⊙ ) I can't believe she could spill such nonsense. Holy mother of god the audacity she had. Holy. Furthermore, she got so many chances to fix her attitude and made the correct decision. Like any of that decision could have save her life. But she somehow made it way worse than it already is.

Been reading a couple of chapter but this story is so blank. Like it has some good moment but the resolution is just horrible.
An example: he beat up the orge( I guess) who is consider powefull , but he beat it easily which no set up at all or at least some cleaver solution. The thing bug me off is how he beat up the wolf with his fist. I know he overpower,out of all solution, the author choose to fist the wolf, that the dumbest way to resolve it. The author could have use these situations to flesh out the world, the characters, the story, or introduce new element or for god sake the main character archery skill that was praised in the beginning. But nope, it's got resolved 3 panel later in the most boring way possible. This story only talk about how skillful the main character is without showing it which is bad writing in general. The only moment I like is when he have to the goblin quest, the author make a great choice of not making the monster be a member which allow it to introduce a character. Other than that the story is bassically overpowering everything.
To me the story interesting concept, decent execution but horrible resolution or maybe it try to be funny, it still bad to me if that the case.
kinda disappoint the way she transform. I mean there nothing special about it, it just there. And I know that it has to be consistent with the system like other transformation but still hope they made an exception lol. I was expecting sailer moon, rise from the death or alien style of transformation lol.