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its a great story but with wasted potential. There was an opportunity to do at least two arcs before the ending, the ml test arc could have been stretched out longer for us to get to know the ml more and see his perspective for a lot longer and the final boss should have been an arc on its own, by stretching out the FB arc we can get to know the characters that support the leads and the antagonists as well as their powers and fully exploe the linits of their abilities as well as an opportunity to watch the second couple's love story blosson.

it was also a great opportunity to expand on professor x as a character seeing as he plays a vital role at the end of the story. instead we got a major info dump at the end of the story and a really rushed ending but i don't hate it the charcters were well written but more could have been done with them ijust feel its a shame it ended so quickly.